[問題]GWD-11-Q28

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GWD-11-Q28:
In an effort to reduce the number of fires started by cigarettes, a major tobacco company is test-marketing a cigarette in which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, thereby slowing the rate at which it burns and lowering the heat it generates.

A. in which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, thereby slowing
B. in which they use thin layers of extra paper in decreasing the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, which slows
C. that uses thin layers of extra paper to decrease the amount of oxygen when it enters the cigarette, thereby slowing
D. for which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen that enters the cigarette, and thereby slowing
E. using thin layers of extra paper in decreasing the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, which slows



ANS:A
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請問C 除了 when it enters 的 it會指代不清外,有啥其他問題呢?
因為我覺得C的 "that uses thin layers of extra paper to decrease the amount of oxygen"
比A的 "in which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease" 來的好

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GWD-11-Q28:
In an effort to reduce the number of fires started by cigarettes, a major tobacco company is test-marketing a cigarette in which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, thereby slowing the rate at which it burns and lowering the heat it generates.

A. in which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, thereby slowing
B. in which they use thin layers of extra paper in decreasing the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, which slows
C. that uses thin layers of extra paper to decrease the amount of oxygen when it enters the cigarette, thereby slowing
D. for which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen that enters the cigarette, and thereby slowing
E. using thin layers of extra paper in decreasing the amount of oxygen entering the cigarette, which slows



ANS:A
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請問C 除了 when it enters 的 it會指代不清外,有啥其他問題呢?
因為我覺得C的 "that uses thin layers of extra paper to decrease the amount of oxygen"
比A的 "in which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease" 來的好

C另一個問題是
香煙 用 薄層?!
這是很奇怪的