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文章a-jan » 2008-01-27 16:28

Federal incentives now encourage investing capital in commercial office buildings despite vacancy rates in existing structures that are exceptionally high and no demand for new construction.

(A) investing capital in commercial office buildings despite vacancy rates in existing structures that are exceptionally high and

(B) capital investment in commercial office buildings, even though vacancy rates in existing structures are exceptionally high and there is

(C) capital to be invested in commercial office buildings even though there are exceptionally high vacancy rates in existing structures with

(D) investing capital in commercial office buildings even though the vacancy rates are exceptionally high in existing structures with

(E) capital investment in commercial office buildings despite vacancy rates in existing structures that are exceptionally high, and although there is

ANS: B

請問選 (B ) 的原因是在那裡? 莫杯杯說過 there be 少選,所以第一時間就刪了(B) 了

慣用搭配:
courage to do => (A)(D)刪, (C)被動不好,刪
不平衡 / there be => (E) 刪

請問答案(B) 那裡好,? 這題還有那些考點? 謝謝。
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文章amazingslim » 2008-01-27 17:52

個人覺得

(A)(E)despite+名詞 that
此句應該是說明空屋率很高及沒有需求蓋新房子這兩件事
所以要用句子來說明會必較清楚(even though+句子),用that來修飾名詞,重點變成vacancy rates ,不是vacancy rates are high這件事

再補充一點,vacancy rates in existing structures that are exceptionally high會有歧義,high會變成形容structures而不是vacancy rates
(C)there are exceptionally high vacancy rates
感覺很多餘,不如vacancy rates are exceptionally high來的直接
(D)可以用名詞,就不需要用動名詞了

感覺(B)句意比較完整

there be不一定錯,要斟酌
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there be 真的要小心使用

文章a-jan » 2008-01-28 21:57

查了一下collins..
even thought + 句子 ==> 可用來說明前面的句子 或 兩件事情的對照
除了even thought 還有 although, whease, while.....etc.

倒是忘了despite + N 的用法,突然想到 PP1-Q142 也是有這樣的考點

謝謝 amazingslim..
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