大全987-Q5

[copycat]

Q:
A controversial figure throughout most of his public life, the Black leader Marcus Garvey advocated that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom.
answer item:
(A) that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom(正確)
(B) that some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him
(C) that some Blacks return to Africa which was the land which symbolized the possibility of freedom to him
(D) some Black’s returning to Africa which was the land that to him symbolized the possibility of freedom
(E) some Black’s return to the land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him, Africa

我想請問一下 這題的(C)是不是因為which was the land which 太繁贅??
(D)選項呢??是否也是which was the land that繁贅還是??
感謝大家

[Calvin]

內文幫妳做了修正

標題請妳改一下，og or gwd or 真題?

謝謝合作

[Calvin]

標題請修改

是來自OG ? or Gwd ? or 真題 ？

感謝妳的合作！

[Behemoth]

http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=157

Thank you~

[bugubugu]

987就是大全...
所以請按此格式:
http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=2566

我已經先幫你改好了...
下次請注意...
謝謝!


P.S.從大全的連結看來...
大家都是做做前面就不做了....

[copycat]

謝謝你幫我改了一下..我有去看要注意的事項..誰知道我還是搞不是很清楚??
下次一定更注意...

[davidlee0222]

Q:
A controversial figure throughout most of his public life, the Black leader Marcus Garvey advocated that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom.
answer item:
(A) that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom(正確)
(B) that some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him
(C) that some Blacks return to Africa which was the land which symbolized the possibility of freedom to him
(D) some Black’s returning to Africa which was the land that to him symbolized the possibility of freedom
(E) some Black’s return to the land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him, Africa

我想請問一下 這題的(C)是不是因為which was the land which 太繁贅??
(D)選項呢??是否也是which was the land that繁贅還是??
感謝大家

advocate一定要用that
DE刪
某些黑人回到非洲
鬥號後是非洲的同位語
B改變句意變成回去那件事是自由的表徵
C兩個which超級awkward & wordy
直接用同位語就相當簡潔

[hungji]

(有誤請指正)
1 快速閱讀五答案
2 差異(1)advocate that S+V/advocate S+V (2)Africa/the African Land
3 回原題 ....S=leader....V=advocated....
4 刪 D E 不成句子
5 (A) 考同位語..不錯保留 (B) African Land..不理想有改變句意嫌疑 (C)which..which..累贅
6 選 A, A 對了. 時間不多 繼續下一題

[oguz]

Q:
A controversial figure throughout most of his public life, the Black leader Marcus Garvey advocated that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom.
answer item:
(A) that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom(正確)
(B) that some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him
(C) that some Blacks return to Africa which was the land which symbolized the possibility of freedom to him
(D) some Black’s returning to Africa which was the land that to him symbolized the possibility of freedom
(E) some Black’s return to the land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him, Africa

我想請問一下 這題的(C)是不是因為which was the land which 太繁贅??
(D)選項呢??是否也是which was the land that繁贅還是??
感謝大家

advocate一定要用that
DE刪
某些黑人回到非洲
鬥號後是非洲的同位語
B改變句意變成回去那件事是自由的表徵
C兩個which超級awkward & wordy
直接用同位語就相當簡潔

我不懂為什麼B中的symbolizing修飾return??

[ck1109]

Q:
A controversial figure throughout most of his public life, the Black leader Marcus Garvey advocated that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom.
answer item:
(A) that some Blacks return to Africa, the land that, to him, symbolized the possibility of freedom(正確)
(B) that some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him
(C) that some Blacks return to Africa which was the land which symbolized the possibility of freedom to him
(D) some Black’s returning to Africa which was the land that to him symbolized the possibility of freedom
(E) some Black’s return to the land symbolizing the possibility of freedom to him, Africa

我想請問一下 這題的(C)是不是因為which was the land which 太繁贅??
(D)選項呢??是否也是which was the land that繁贅還是??
感謝大家

advocate一定要用that
DE刪
某些黑人回到非洲
鬥號後是非洲的同位語
B改變句意變成回去那件事是自由的表徵
C兩個which超級awkward & wordy
直接用同位語就相當簡潔

不好意思
請問一下
AT中的關代不是只可以代替一個名詞嗎
那選項B會有您所說的代替一件事情的問題嗎??


另外我想問的是
選項B錯會不會是因為
to him 的問題
有沒有造成修飾語誤置的可能呢?

[dibert8]

Sb advocate that 的 that 是連接詞引導名詞子句, 不是關係代名詞.
symbolising (= which symbolized) 修飾 land.
the African land (the land of or owned by an African) 好像不等於 the Africa (the continent of Africa).
(B) to him 可能修飾 "some Blacks return to the African land symbolizing the possibility of freedom" , 也可能修飾 "symbolizing the possibility of freedom" . 這題 to him 擺不同位子, 的確有考修飾語錯置.

[dibert8]

(D) (E) 沒有不成句, 線應該是從 that 開始劃
(D) 的意思似乎有些黑人已經回非洲了
(E) Africa 跟 him 同位, him 顯然不等於 Africa.