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文章小晃兄 » 2005-07-02 21:11

這題有夠長,手好痠,答案(b),想請問為什麼(e)不對,謝謝。 :laugh
Stretching an imposing 220 miles and Africa's largest current engineering project is the excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan, a canal that is scheduled for completion in 1985 and will be one of the world's longest waterways.

(a)Stretching an imposing 220 miles and Africa's largest current engineering project is the excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan, a canal that is scheduled for completion in 1985 and will be one of the world's longest waterways.

(b)The excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan is Africa's largest current engineering project;scheduled for completion in 1985, the canal will be one of the world's longest artificial waterways, stretching an imposing 220 miles.

(c)Scheduled for completion in 1985, the excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan is Africa's largest current engineering project, and the canal will be one of the world's longest artificial waterways and stretch an imposing 220 miles.

(d)Africa's largest current engineering project is the excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan; the canal, to be one of the world's longest artificial waterways, stretching an imposing 220 miles, and it is scheduled for completion in 1985.

(e)Scheduled for completion in 1985, the Jonglei Canal will be one of the world's longest artificial waterways, stretching an imposing 220 miles, and its excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan is Africa's largest current engineering project.
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文章Pufa » 2005-07-02 21:55

Scheduled for completion in 1985, the Jonglei Canal will be one of the world's longest artificial waterways, stretching an imposing 220 miles, and its excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan is Africa's largest current engineering project.

拋塊磚...
it的角色很尷尬。
the excavation of the Jonglei Canal.
You get what you share
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文章keane0727 » 2006-12-22 15:35

請問C除了Scheduled for 修飾the excavation of the Jonglei Canal以外,還有什麼錯嗎?

我認為語意上不容易看出這個dangling modifier...
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文章hughes0305 » 2006-12-22 15:47

keane0727所說的修飾對象錯誤,
正是dangling modifier了啊!
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文章keane0727 » 2006-12-22 22:00

hughes0305 \$m[1]:keane0727所說的修飾對象錯誤,
正是dangling modifier了啊!


是阿hughes0305,我知道那是dangling modifier
我是要問C除此之外還有沒有別的錯誤

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文章hughes0305 » 2006-12-23 12:08

(b)The excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan is Africa's largest current engineering project;scheduled for completion in 1985, the canal will be one of the world's longest artificial waterways, stretching an imposing 220 miles.

(c)Scheduled for completion in 1985, the excavation of the Jonglei Canal in sourthern Sudan is Africa's largest current engineering project, and the canal will be one of the world's longest artificial waterways and stretch an imposing 220 miles.

我不認為C除了脫節外有什麼問題,
硬要雞蛋裡挑骨頭的話,
我會説C的 and stretch an imposing 220 miles不好,
因為其他句都是用stretching, 改用and stretch把語氣稍有更動了!
不過這不應該是說c錯的主因囉
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