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大全987-Q58

帖子vivid » 2005-08-06 01:19

Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.
(B) to recognize and treat their symptoms
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated
(D) of recognizing and treating symptoms
(E) of getting his or her symptoms recognized and treated



答案c
我原本選的是d
我的想法有二:
1.
d感覺比較簡潔
想問c的getting有什麼特殊的意義嗎
跟d 直接用recognizing and treating有何不同
2.
d錯的原因是不是少了their
無法表達出是誰的symptoms

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Re: 大全987-Q58

帖子維尼 » 2005-08-06 02:30

vivid \$m[1]:Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.
(B) to recognize and treat their symptoms
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated
(D) of recognizing and treating symptoms
(E) of getting his or her symptoms recognized and treated



答案c
我原本選的是d
我的想法有二:
1.
d感覺比較簡潔
想問c的getting有什麼特殊的意義嗎
跟d 直接用recognizing and treating有何不同
2.
d錯的原因是不是少了their
無法表達出是誰的symptoms

請大大賜教
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就原句句意來看
並不是survivors自己發現與治療
所以我傾向選C
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帖子hungji » 2005-08-06 04:01

完全同意維尼的看法
這一題考的是(1)簡潔 (2)改變句意
"讓症狀能被確認診斷與治療"
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帖子candrow » 2006-06-02 16:25

vivid \$m[1]:Adult survivors of child abuse traditionally have had little or no chance that they could get their symptoms recognized and treated.
(B) to recognize and treat their symptoms
(C) of getting their symptoms recognized and treated
(D) of recognizing and treating symptoms
(E) of getting his or her symptoms recognized and treated



(A) redundancy
原因不明 只覺得唸起來不通順
(B)和(D)問題很相似
一般不定詞都是in order to V簡化成的to V
強調主詞就是行為的發動者
所以無生命的東西絕對不能當做in order to V當句主詞

就這題而言
家暴倖存者(Adult survivors of child abuse )會產生身心症狀
只有doctors可以recognize and treat這些症狀
病人無法醫治自己
所以當行為發動者不是Adult survivors
(B)就不可以用簡化的to recognize and treat their symptoms
(自己醫治自己)
(D)雖然沒有to, 但仍舊有主詞發動行為的句意

至於(E)
能有their就不要用his or her ---redundancy
其實我們每個人都是一隻鳥
架好了巢 就會想要棲息在裡頭
也會害怕別的鳥來搶奪
但如果某一天 巢真的不見了
又會飛舞 回到自由之身
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帖子dibert8 » 2007-03-22 01:51

(A) they = survivors; that 引導名詞子句作 chance 的同位語, 敗筆在 could 跟 chance 涵義是一樣的 => redundancy! 此外, 前面語氣強烈地說 no chance, 後面用 could 削弱了語氣, 而且句意顯得搖擺不定, 不知重點是 no chance (沒機會) 還是 could (有機會). => 不好
(B) to +V 的主詞是 survivors, 這些人應該不會自己診斷和治療自己吧! => 刪除
(C) chance of +Ving, 查字典發現原來這是 chance 的典型用法,這樣看來並沒有故意為難我們外國人,可能是我們不太了解他們!
(D) of +V-ing 的主詞是 survivors, 跟 (B) 錯一樣 => 刪除
(E) his/her 數量跟 survivors 不一致 => 刪除
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帖子hwatai » 2007-06-10 23:37

補充一點... (B)(D)的recognize and treat their symptoms在句意上應該有問題
symptoms只能被recognize,不能被treat
所以一定要get symptoms recognized and treated
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