[問題]gwd-24-36

[cheyen]

BE: 缺少動詞

請問B
B) making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
動詞不是marked嗎?

D) which made possible the mass-production of manufactured goods, was marked by the
use of

因為我BD決選...
選到B,不知道是不是因為缺動詞所致而錯?
我覺得making possible 修飾The Industrial Revolution好像也沒錯
和which made 修飾The Industrial Revolution是語意上的差異嗎?
還是語法上的問題?
請高人指點一下，謝謝^^

[yellowten]

BE: 缺少動詞

請問B
B) making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
動詞不是marked嗎?

D) which made possible the mass-production of manufactured goods, was marked by the
use of

因為我BD決選...
選到B,不知道是不是因為缺動詞所致而錯?
我覺得making possible 修飾The Industrial Revolution好像也沒錯
和which made 修飾The Industrial Revolution是語意上的差異嗎?
還是語法上的問題?
請高人指點一下，謝謝^^

我不是高手啦
不過我覺得B使原句變成
The Industrial Revolution, (making possible the mass production of manufactured goods), marked by the use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.

()裡的不要看

工業革命變成主動去mark

但其實應該是要用被動was marked

我想這是B錯的主要原因

請多多指教~~

[whoops]

不過我覺得B使原句變成
The Industrial Revolution, (making possible the mass production of manufactured goods), marked by the use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.

()裡的不要看

工業革命變成主動去mark

但其實應該是要用被動was marked

我想這是B錯的主要原因

請多多指教~~

同意這個說法
問題應該就是出在被動上
B裡的,making possible..
D裡的,which make possible..
應該都沒有問題
請多多指教..

[dibert8]

想起莫伯伯說"被動少選".什麼時候選呢?
GMAT在該選被動的時候都會有一個暗號,就是介係詞 by .有這個字,在主被動二選一的時候,幾乎都是被動勝出,也差不多只有這種時候要選被動.

[ggethan]

by the use of 不是wordy& redundancy的用法嗎 og裡也講過 怎麼這題變正確答案

不過跟沒動詞跟單複數這些嚴重的錯誤比起來

~~很不情願的選(d)