由 dibert8 » 2008-03-05 12:51
Minnesota is the only one of the contiguous forty-eight states that still has a sizable wolf population, and where this predator remains the archenemy of cattle and sheep.
(A) that still has a sizable wolf population, and where
(B) that still has a sizable wolf population, where
(C) that still has a sizable population of wolves, and where
(D) where the population of wolves is still sizable;
(E) where there is still a sizable population of wolves and where
(A) (C) and 前加逗點另起一句, where (副詞)不能當主詞
(B) where =/= population
(D) 分號另起一句, 改變句意 (this predator 指所有的 wolves, 不是那些 states 裡的 wolves)