由 dibert8 » 2007-06-19 04:00
從 OG 的解釋看看: In C, the phrase proposed to reduce, by nearly 17 percent, the amount from the previous year that was allocated is unidiomatic and overly wordy. Choice C also violates parallelism with allocated for the maintenance of... and to subsidize.
OG 認為 (C) 的句子寫法是錯的! unidiomatic 應該是結構錯吧! wordy => 不簡潔.
proposed to reduce {... the amount from the previous year that was allocated for the maintenance of the city's major cultural institutions} and to subsidize {hundreds of local arts groups}.
如果 to reduce 和 to subsidize 平衡,發現 OG 蠻忌諱的一點:結構不對稱, to reduce 後面有一長串,又帶關代子句.除 wordy 之外, to reduce 不定詞引出的結構也太複雜,跟 to subsidize 單純地接一個名詞片語當受詞,相當不對稱.
OG 認為錯的地方,就是它指出來的那個關代結構: the amount from the previous year that was allocated => 不對稱,而且不簡潔.
所以 to reduce {for the maintenance of the city's major cultural institutions} and to subsidize {hundreds of local arts groups} 這樣的結構可以接受 (先不論 reduce for 對不對), 關代子句含前致詞那一段是 OG 不能接受的.
若不以結構來看, (C) 也改變了原始句意.這是比較簡單去排除 (C) 的方法.