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文章yellowten » 2006-08-17 13:57

Q29:
Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

A. Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.
B. Authoritative parents who are more likely than permissive parents to have adolescent children that are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.
C. Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents, are the more likely to be self-confident, have a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as adolescents.
D. Children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.
E. Rather than permissive parents, the children of authoritative parents are the more likely to have self-confidence, a high self-esteem, and to be responsibly independent as an adolescent.

答案是A
我想問的是, 選項A as adolescents 插在那邊可以嗎?


以下是我刪掉各選項的理由
B 主要句子沒有動詞 刪
C D 主題改變 刪 (本來重點在家長 變成在小孩)
E Rather than前後不平衡 刪


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文章hsudk » 2006-08-17 18:03

Why not??
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文章yellowten » 2006-08-19 10:58

hsudk \$m[1]:Why not??


我自己想了一想 是不是原本是這樣


Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent as adolescents .

他只是把它搬到前面?這樣子離要修飾的孩子比較近
反正插入句放哪都沒有關係?
請問這樣的想法是正確的嗎?

或著是說這個句子有省略什麼嗎?
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文章hccill » 2006-08-19 12:04

不是大牛,但提供一下小弟的想法...

Authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

我覺得原句是比較好的,因為who=children, 而as adolescents是個介片用來修飾who,之後再用be V abj1, adj2, and adj3來說明什麼樣的who,但若是像你說所說的,把as adolescents搬到後面去,感覺就不太一樣了~
因為as(介)+身分,而放在最後面不知道修飾誰,若說要修飾who則距離太遠了!
我想還是原來的句子比較好一點~
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