pp2新題

[shawntws]

Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.

(A) they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease.
(B) after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again.
(C) in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to began to grow again.
(D) with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particularly red wine, they began growing again.
(E) a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particularly red wine, started them growing again.








答案(A)，我選了(B)
昨天在做PP時，做到了這題SC，想了很久還是想不太懂考點在哪
唯一覺得比較有問題的點是(A)的and particularly of red wine，這句是當同位語補充說明嗎？既然是同位語為什麼要加and呢?

在各網站上也都遍尋不著相關討論，想說可能是新題，請大家幫忙解答，小弟感激不盡！

[stephenhsu]

B..they began growing again
原提沒有用進行式~這個點很好刪

[shawntws]

they began growing again 這個應該不算進行式吧
growing只是Ving而已，這句應該還是過去式

不過begin+to V 或begin+ Ving 兩者的用法或意義上有差別嗎
我查了longman字典，兩者似乎看不出差別


還是謝謝樓上～提醒了一個沒發現的盲點！

[stephenhsu]

想到另一個點了
s+v but after....,s+v
跟A比較起來,結構上看起來並不是那麼平衡
A就是s+v but s+v
這個點純粹個人想法
參考看看吧~

[dibert8]

(C) (D) (E) 都改變句意: after the 1991... 變成 in a 1991...
(A) (B) 選一個.
(A) 頭重腳輕(前面一堆修飾主詞才出來)
所以 (B) 比較好.
begin 加不定詞或V-ing都可以. (只是不知有何差別)
From Longman,
begin to do something
She began to feel a sense of panic.
begin doing something
I began teaching in 1984.

[god0204]

(C) (D) (E) 都改變句意: after the 1991... 變成 in a 1991...
(A) (B) 選一個.
(A) 頭重腳輕(前面一堆修飾主詞才出來)
所以 (B) 比較好.
begin 加不定詞或V-ing都可以. (只是不知有何差別)
From Longman,
begin to do something
She began to feel a sense of panic.
begin doing something
I began teaching in 1984.

1.答案不是A嗎?
2.我會選Aㄟ~理由是:
C:which不對,原意是指moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine 這兩個都跟heart disease 有關連,但C變成只有particularly of red wine 有關連.

D:in a 1991位置很怪,linked後面應該直接接關連性的東西,接一個時間點感覺不流暢.

E:一般而言,應該會先講1991的report說了什麼事情,而不會先把事情講完,再講那份報告吧,這樣就沒有人想知道啦,似乎是頭重腳輕.另外in particularly red wine的位置也怪怪的,E的句意是似乎跟in a 1991 report平衡,但它不是做moderate alcohol consumption同位語,就是跟moderate alcohol consumption平衡,怎麼樣都不會跟in a 1991 report平衡.

B:我覺得began+Ving好怪^^",除此外A很平衡它的句意要講的是moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly (moderate consumption) of red wine 這兩件事跟reduced risk of heart disease有關,B的寫法變成是單單moderate consumption of alcohol=particularly red wine跟reduced risk of heart disease有關,似已改變句意.

[redeyes[origen]]

我也是考慮(A)和(B), 然後選了(A)
排除(B)的原因是, 同位語"particularly red wine"應該是修飾alcohol, 前句應該改為consumption of alcohol比較清楚. 不過後來又覺得選項(A)中"and particularly of red wine"的"and"是不是多餘呢? 這邊不太懂...

[wolftin[origen]]

B=> 1. consumption不可數，不加冠詞”a”
2. , particularly red wine,雙向修飾

註：答案A 用 " , and" 的用意就是為了提醒讀者，此句是往前修飾 = 前一句的附帶說明
也避免了雙逗點的副詞片語夾在中間，雙向修飾

CDE=>都少了after的句意

C=> 1. wine, which was linked 指代錯誤
2. but moderate alcohol consumption(S), … , caused(V) them to begin to grow
D=> 1. , in particular red wine, 雙向修飾
E=> 1. in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine 誤導兩句平衡!?!?
2. a reduced risk(S) …started(V) them growing again


begin to V / Ving都是可以的
to V = 開始去做(尚未做)
Ving = 開始做了(正在做)


有誤請指正，THX