不好意思 小弟自我反省 再自己回一下文章
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B. As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed staying where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.The honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and staying / stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
其中E選項的staying有問題 但如CD上眾網友說到 原題可能是 "stays" 那就沒問題了
SC由於叫做修辭 所以句意至上 C選項看來漂亮無比 但中間插入句造成可以略過之後 stinger自己result in 致死 這是awkward...最大忌諱
E的with the fact that 我用辜狗神過一次 算常用
OG中也沒說不能這樣用 只有說 "with the fact of " <--不好 , wordy, 但並非 "with the fact that"
若考試碰到原題 題目中是stays -->基於語意考量 選E 吧 是針留在體內才是造成的原因~
再補充一下某一牛津還是劍橋文學博士的回答
With regard to the honey bee's stinger, I think E is the right choice because of what your friend said. It's the staying that causes fatal injury, not the stinging alone. E is also just better written in every way.
以上引述自CD-DonYuntao網友詢問老師的文章
http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp ... ID=&skin=0
小弟不才剛好是念語言學出來的(但是大學太混根本沒學好)
以我的觀點來看不論再怎麼囉唆或 再怎麼不平衡或醜 只要是唯一能真正表達句意的選項 就該選~ 所以E嚕
