GWD8-15

[agk99]

Q15:
Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.


A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.
B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.
C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.
D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.
E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.



答案為什麼是C，為什麼為什麼

[illuna]

這題我卡在C跟E....不過後來看句尾form的用法選了C

agk大哥你對哪個答案有問題....

我先說個大概...

A的condensing是指clouds還是ocean water?

B的form沒有用被動後面又接by實在很嚴重的錯誤...讓form在本答案變成名詞了...

D...ocean water比the water in the ocean簡潔吧?

E....form的動詞用法

[agk99]

我是CE選一個，但我反而覺得E的form as 好一點
是沒有這樣的用法嗎?再討論看看好了

[魚]

我是CE選一個，但我反而覺得E的form as 好一點
是沒有這樣的用法嗎?再討論看看好了

大哥 請再看依次 c/e

想想平衡 :)

[agk99]

再看一次這題，覺得實際考試時的差異真是少的可憐
往往都是五個刪到剩二、三個，仍後還是選到錯的
特別還要押時間，真的很辛苦

[bestjavabean]

ex: Moisture in the atmosphere condensed into dew during the night.

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.
所以confense 應該是 ocean water 做的動作 壓縮成...
不是atmosphere E

[Calvin]

同意bestjavabean的分析

[ivanchiang]

說說我的看法~順便為這題加點料

A-ocean's water怎麼看怎麼怪，我想"ocean water"會好點(如正確答案C)；還有那個condensing，要指什麼實在是讓人難以判斷
B-看完CD討論，就是沒人提Clouds form by....這個我認為無論如何，不管clouds是不是用formed by比較好，就是該用被動；condensing問題如A；which是大忌，看不出which有問題的戰友要把OG拿出來再K一下
C-正確答案
D-"The" water不知道大家會不會覺得很怪異~雖然它是"指"ocean裡的water,但我還是反對這選項�的用法；which問題同B；CD討論裡提到的句子重心由clouds變成water我不贊成~正確選項�的重心不也變成"water"?
E-一樣是which問題；to form as clouds怪怪的~說不出的怪異~~

小小意見請參考~

[安安]

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.


這題是平衡3個動詞嗎?

[puthing]

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.


A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

想請教一下(A)

condensing 的用法有誤嗎?

如果我為了要避開which的修飾錯誤而想修飾更前面的主詞Clouds

不是用分詞會比較好嗎?

還是有可能指代到atmosphere而造成錯誤呢?

還請大家指點一下

謝謝

[Pufa]

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

condensing 的用法有誤嗎?
如果我為了要避開which的修飾錯誤而想修飾更前面的主詞Clouds
不是用分詞會比較好嗎?
還是有可能指代到atmosphere而造成錯誤呢?

是的，, which condenses = , condensing，會造成岐意。
而且A整句都是被動，不好。

[puthing]

難怪如果要用分詞修飾前面一點的字

ETS喜歡把分詞提到句首變成 V-ing / V-ed , S

這樣就不會有其他詞跟S搶分詞了

謝謝!

[chihhan123]

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.


A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

想請教一下(A)

condensing 的用法有誤嗎?

如果我為了要避開which的修飾錯誤而想修飾更前面的主詞Clouds

不是用分詞會比較好嗎?

還是有可能指代到atmosphere而造成錯誤呢?

還請大家指點一下

謝謝

是沒錯，但按照句義，
被condense的應該修飾的是ocean water 不是cloud

(A)用condensing反而造成句義怪異 → 不選

[luckydog]

小弟在看到這題的時候，第一個直覺想到的是莫北北所說的「主題移轉」的問題，原是的主題「感覺上」好像是說「雲的形成」，但是(C)的主題和主詞都變成了OCEAN WATER，不知道有沒有牛人可以針對這這個「主題移轉」這方面來討論？？感恩！

[ijac]

我的做法是

A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.
==> atmosphere condensing ..... 感覺很奇怪

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.
==> oceans rises high into.... 不可能

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.
==> S是ocean water, 可以evaporates, rises high and condenses 所以正確

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.
==> S是water, evaporates主動, warmed被動, rises主動, condeses主動, 不佳

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.
==>atmosphere condenses..... 應該不是正確的句意