[問題]考古題Form 24 Q24

[shena]

Many women who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past are now going into business,government,and industry,areas where ther are opportunities not previously available to them.
(A)who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past
(B)who otherwise might once choose teaching as a career
(C)who might once have been choosen teaching as a career
(D)who,in the past, might otherwise once have choosen teaching as a career
(E)who, as a career, might have choosen teaching in the past

Ans:(C)

這一題就完全的看不懂了...正確答案把題目中原有的"in the past"都刪除了

[維尼]

Many women who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past are now going into business,government,and industry,areas where ther are opportunities not previously available to them.
(A)who might otherwise choose teaching as a career in the past
(B)who otherwise might once choose teaching as a career
(C)who might once have been choosen teaching as a career
(D)who,in the past, might otherwise once have choosen teaching as a career
(E)who, as a career, might have choosen teaching in the past

Ans:(C)

這一題就完全的看不懂了...正確答案把題目中原有的"in the past"都刪除了

once 就有 過去曾經 的意思呀 :)
所以 D 選項有 redundancy

[best555tw]

這題考前後對稱
後面沒畫線部分時間副詞放前面
前面的時間副詞也要放前面

[維尼]

這題考前後對稱
後面沒畫線部分時間副詞放前面
前面的時間副詞也要放前面

嗯嗯
我都沒注意到這點

我自己是這樣做的:
假設法的時態: 用 完成式 表達 過去的事件 => a b 不選
conciseness: once 和 in the past 重複 => d 不選
修飾語誤置: as a career變成表身份 應該要跟在 teaching 後面 -> e 不選