[討論]OG裡頭有關修辭岐意與邏輯錯誤的討論

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176. As a result of the ground-breaking work of Barbara McClintock, many scientists now believe that all of the information encoded in 50.000 to 100.000 of the different genes found in a human cell are contained in merely three percent of the cell's DNA.
(A) 50,000 to 100,000 of the different genes found in a human cell are contained in merely=>1.不加the的後果是, 50,000 to 100,000 of the different gene不知道這些gene是不是特別指定是後面的cell的,可能全部都是也可能全部都不是,因為沒有加the去指定
(B) 50,000 to 100,000 of the human cell's different genes are contained in a mere=>1.不加the的後果是, 50,000 to 100,000 of the different gene不知道這些gene是不是特別指定是後面的cell的,可能全部都是也可能全部都不是,因為沒有加the去指定 2.
(C) the 50,000 to 100,000 different genes found in human cells are contained in merely=>不知道這些的基因是指在一個細胞的量還是一堆細胞的量,不能夠確定其語意
(D) 50,000 to 100,000 of human cells' different genes is contained in merely =>1.不加the的後果是, 50,000 to 100,000 of the different gene不知道這些gene是不是特別指定是後面的cell的,可能全部都是也可能全部都不是,因為沒有加the去指定 2. 不知道這些的基因是指在一個細胞的量還是一堆細胞的量,不能夠確定其語意
(E) the 50,000 to 100,000 different genes found in a human cell is contained in a mere

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164. The commission proposed that funding for the park's development, which could be open to the public early next year. is obtained through a local bond issue.
(A) that funding for the park's development, which could be open to the public early next year, is=>which~形容development,development怎麼會open呢?Park才是吧
(B) that funding for development of the park, which could be open to the public early next year, be
(C) funding for the development of the park, perhaps open to the public early next year, to be
(D) funds for the park's development, perhaps open to the public early next year, be =>which~形容development,development怎麼會open呢?Park才是吧
(E) development funding for the park, which could be open to the public early next year, is to be=>development funding能對群眾開放,扭曲句意,propose後面直接接受詞,which想當然是修飾受詞阿

[bugubugu]

176.
我覺得(C)(D)錯在改句意....
因為原題是說"一個人"的50000~100000不同基因....
可是CD就變成很多人的50000~100000不同基因...
變成數量上的亂移轉....
所以錯...

然後 (A) (B) (C)是錯在動詞要用單數....
因為information不可數當主詞...


這是我自己的看法啦....

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71. The original building and loan associations were
organized as limited life funds, whose members made monthly payments on their share subscriptions, then taking turns drawing on the funds for home mortgages.
(A) subscriptions, then taking turns drawing=>這個句子在表一系列的動作發生,但taking~可能會讓讀者誤以為修飾前面的名詞subscription
(C) subscriptions and then took turns drawing結論:表伴隨動作的句子最好放句首或句尾,不然很容易造成修辭誤置

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mike ^^ well done~

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113. Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and saw monkeys sleeping on the branches. whose arms and legs hang like socks on a clothesline.
(A) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang=>讓讀者誤以為whose~ 修飾樹枝而不是猴子
(B) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs were hanging=>讓讀者誤以為whose~ 修飾樹枝而不是猴子
(C) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging
(D) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging=>with~可做跳耀修飾動名詞sleeping,正確表達
(E) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs have hung=>讓讀者誤以為whose~ 修飾樹枝而不是猴子

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128. New hardy varieties of rice show promise of producing high yields without the costly requirements of irrigation and application of commercial fertilizer by earlier high-yielding varieties.
(A) requirements of irrigation and application of commercial fertilizer by earlier high-yielding varieties=>by~的受詞就是那fertilizer,所以造成earlier high-yielding varieties應用在肥料上
(B) requirements by earlier high-yielding varieties of application of commercial fertilizer and irrigation=>不清楚是一個operation還是兩個
(C) requirements for application of commercial fertilizer and irrigation of earlier high-yielding varieties=>那個earlier high-yielding varieties只有被irrigation獨享,
(D) application of commercial fertilizer and irrigation that was required by earlier high-yielding varieties=>不清楚是一個operation還是兩個
(E) irrigation and application of commercial fertilizer that were required by earlier high-yielding varieties

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113. Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and saw monkeys sleeping on the branches. whose arms and legs hang like socks on a clothesline.

(D) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging=>with~可做跳耀修飾動名詞sleeping,正確表達

請問D句還原本句是什麼??? 為何mikelee說"with~可做跳耀修飾動名詞sleeping,正確表達"