“Scientists must typically work 60 to 80 hours a week if they hope to further their careers; consequently, good and affordable all-day child care must be made available to both male and female scientists if they are to advance in their fields. Moreover, requirements for career advancement must be made more flexible so that preschool-age children can spend a significant portion of each day with a parent.”
流行科學雜誌：
科學家如果要發展他們的事業一般必須每周工作60到80個小時。因此，好的可行的全天兒童看護對希望在自身領域有所發展男性和女性科學家是十分必須的。而且，事業發展的需求必須更靈活以便學齡前兒童每天都能有相當多的時間和父母在一起。
這一篇我只找到ㄧ個錯誤
：oversimplification-兒童看護是發展事業成功的要件，作者少說其他很多也會影響的因素。
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