[問題]pp test 2 題號130 structure....

[amdk88000]

Intricate choreographer emphasized the beauty and virtuosity of the nineteenth-century prima ballerina , while the male dancer functioned only as her partner until the twentieth century .

答案是A....請問一下要怎麼改...

[Quinton]

Intricate choreographer emphasized the beauty and virtuosity of the nineteenth-century prima ballerina , while the male dancer functioned only as her partner until the twentieth century .

答案是A....請問一下要怎麼改...

應該是加S吧！前面沒有冠詞

[yongzhou]

Brilliant choreography emphasised the beauty and virtuosity of the prima ballerina whereas the male dancer functioned only as her partner until the 20th century.
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原句本身有歷史背景上下文,( 且原句用對比conj.(whereas)邏輯並不好)
(原文也許就是這篇, http://podiatry.curtin.edu.au/dance.html )
加上ETS 出題人員,不小心; 加上想要讓人瞭解的"the nineteenth-century" prima ballerina
於是就出現這樣的怪東西
替他重新出題:(去掉尾巴until the twentieth century )

Intricate choreography emphasized the beauty and virtuosity of the nineteenth-century prima ballerina, as the male dancer functioned only as her partner.

如果硬是要對比
The nineteenth-century prima ballerina was emphasized in the intricate choreography for her beauty and virtuosity, whereas the male dancer functioned only as her partner.

要不然
Intricate choreography emphasized the beauty and virtuosity of the nineteenth-century prima ballerina, whereas the male dancer was used only as her partner.

[訪客]

我不懂為什麼choreographer不能用,要用choreography???
有誰能告訴我呢???

[訪客]

推....