整合寫作模版這樣是否正確無誤?

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我自己參照其他人的模板寫了個自己的東西出來,可是不確定文法對不對,用字是否有偏誤,可否請板上的高手幫個小忙,瀏覽一下
The lecturer talks about (討論主題). He says that the theory stated in the passage was very different and somewhat inaccurate when compare to what happened to real.
The following are three main differences between the author and the speaker.

First of all,(比較點1). The author asserts that (文章1). However, the speaker believe that (演說1).

Secondly, (比較點2). The reading passage mentions that (文章2). In contrast, the listening passage finds that (演說2).

Thirdly,(比較點3). The writer maintain that (文章3). Nevertheless, the speaker illustrate that (演說3).

To sum up, the author and the speaker share the difference of opinion over the issue of (主題). in the end the author indicates support for the idea, while the speaker is opposed.