GRE argument模板的問題

[csl]

先前爬文到的argument模板

舉例如下:

統計數字有問題)
The argument seems to make attractive claim, but its persuasive force is
seriously weakened by misinterpretation of the statistics presented here.
That is, the statistics in the study may be misleading because … is not
specified. Besides, the credibility of the study cited in the argument is in
doubt. If a reliable institution such as Gallop conducted the study, the
argument is more convincing.


我想請問的是,考argument時我是像模版這樣(我會稍加修改)

點出問題就好..還是要一直深入攻到底呢??

感覺模板詞句較優美但是似乎都點出問題沒一直攻到底

因為我也沒經驗,想請大家給我指導..謝謝!!

ps.若考試是醬模板降寫就ok感覺背的很熟的話argument這部份

應該能避免很多寫作錯誤,文句又優美錯誤(我的理想目標是4~4.5)

但若要攻到底自己發揮的部份可能就得變多了

[atung]

根據我看AWA的評分標準是發展比較重要
有的範文發展的很精闢 就算只有打ㄧ各弱點
分數也有6分 請參考