GWD 30-01

[eiswein]

Q1:
The artist Renoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.

A.as they arranged a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden
B.as a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden and was being arranged
C.as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged
D.during the arrangement of a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden
E.while they arranged a bouquet of roses that had just been picked from his garden

我選B，答案是C
想請問一下，B錯應該是時態有錯
可是為什麼不能用had been呢?玫瑰花不是在更早之前就從花園摘下來嗎?
希望大家能告訴我哪裡錯了，謝謝

[eiswein]

沒人理我....
那我自問自答好了...
我在想應該是因為B句意有問題..
因為看起來像是兩的動作是一起發生的...這是有問題的
是這樣嗎?

[hughes0305]

的確是句意的問題
C - as a bouquet of roses (just picked from his garden) was being arranged
這樣應該會比較清楚, C用過去分詞來修釋 bouquet

B則是在強調兩個動作, 事實上, 那個動作可以用pp去修飾即可

小弟的淺見, 請多指教　

[eiswein]

謝謝hughes

[bonus]

A, E: they指代錯誤
B: 不平衡
D: 句意邏輯怪
所以選C

[kaijen]

請問(D)為什麼不對??
總覺得答案用進行式怪怪的

[hey]

(D)選項犯了一個錯誤, 當原題為動詞時, 而答案將其改為名詞, 形容詞, 副詞則盡量不選, 因為其已改變句意了...原題arrange, 但答案卻改為arrangement, 所以不選此答案

[dibert8]

想請問一下，B錯應該是時態有錯
可是為什麼不能用had been呢?玫瑰花不是在更早之前就從花園摘下來嗎?
希望大家能告訴我哪裡錯了，謝謝

(B) (C) 決選時,從 (D) 的 'during' 看出 as 想表達的意思應該是"當" (when), 句意上不與完成式連用.所以 (B) 不選.

[小花]

The artist Renoir’s last word was “flowers,” spoken as a bouquet of roses just picked from his garden was being arranged in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.

有人知道這一句的意思是什麼嗎?
這句是不是主詞 動詞有移轉 看起來實在很不順眼
spoken又是修飾誰呢?
被動為何又要being呢?

[阿琪]

的確是蠻特別的一個句子~翻看看~

藝術家Renoir 所說的最後一個字是"flowers", 說這個字的時間點正是枚瑰花束被arranged(安放)在他臥室窗臺上的花瓶裡的時候(而這花束正是從他的花園裡所摘的) ==> 括號為作者想進一步的補充說明。

註：word 這個單字有 "話" 的意義存在 (並不僅有"字")！

spoken是要對 last word 補充說明何時以及什麼情境下說的！

用being 是要強調 所說的"flowers"和"arranged" 是同時進行的

a bouquet 是物…所以須以被動的形式出現

由於要強調同時…又要符合被動形態，所以產生了：was being arranged 的詞句


以上 參考

[lindababy]

補充一下
(B)as a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden and was being arranged

完全改變了句子重心
把原本修飾語成分，變成了並列結構

這種錯誤選像還滿常見的
給大家參考