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GWD10-24(with用法)

文章liwuu » 2004-12-17 17:44

Q24:
For the last five years the Dutch economy has grown faster than Britain, France, or Germany, with the unemployment rate having remained well below that of the other three countries.
A. Britain, France, or Germany, with the unemployment rate having remained
B. have those of Britain, France, or Germany, and the unemployment rate remaining
C. have Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained
D. the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained
E. the economies of Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained

答案是E...我選D,疑問如下
(1)我覺得D的句意比E好...D中的with=in spite of(表示儘管在失業率維持的情況下)...E變成講兩件事!!另外,請問一下with這樣的用法妥當嗎?

(2)economy為什麼要變成複數(常用單數)...若是要用複數的話,為什麼題目中後面that of the other three countries中的that(替代unemployment rate)不用寫成those...
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文章Pufa » 2004-12-17 21:10

這篇沒人回,讓我拋塊磚頭...

第一個問題:
D中with的位置容易被看成修飾Germany,代表德國的狀況。
若with=in spite of的話,小弟認為改寫成下面的樣子比較清楚,
For the last five years, with the unemployment rate having remained well below that of the other three countries, the Dutch economy has grown faster than Britain, France, or Germany.
不知道對不對,請前輩們指點。
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文章liwuu » 2004-12-19 09:52

再次感受到Pufa的溫暖了...感覺with似乎的確會造成有些誤導...那針對我的第二點疑問呢?!謝囉...
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文章Pufa » 2004-12-19 10:26

Pufa \$m[1]:這篇沒人回,讓我拋塊磚頭...

第一個問題:
D中with的位置容易被看成修飾Germany,代表德國的狀況。
若with=in spite of的話,小弟認為改寫成下面的樣子比較清楚,
For the last five years, with the unemployment rate having remained well below that of the other three countries, the Dutch economy has grown faster than Britain, France, or Germany.
不知道對不對,請前輩們指點。


我發現這句也有歧意...year, with.... +o(

第二個問題我也不清楚,economics of 3 countries,that(the unemployment rate) of 3 countries. 8-)
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文章liwuu » 2004-12-19 14:40

Pufa我看到這題也有出現在GWD13-33,魚姐也有提問類似問題
可以連結過去看看
http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopi ... ight=GWD13
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文章hungji » 2005-07-08 08:50

1.觀察五答案差異
2.差異(1)B,F, or G 與 have those of B,F,or,G 與 have B,F,or G 與 the economy of B,F, or G 與 the economies of B,F,or,G (2) ,with 與 ,and (3) that has 與 has remained 與 having remained
3.回原題目, Dutch economy has grown faster than...well below that of the other 3 countries
4.刪 A 因 "having" remained...
5.刪 B 因 and...."V" 失蹤
6.刪 C,D 經濟跟經濟比, 一國跟三國各別比
7.選 E, E 對了
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文章leoitc » 2005-08-28 12:13

那C為什麼錯?
have 對上 has grown 在前面不是最完整不會造成錯誤比較對象的嗎?
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文章faithful » 2005-09-16 16:47

leoitc \$m[1]:那C為什麼錯?
have 對上 has grown 在前面不是最完整不會造成錯誤比較對象的嗎?


我一開始也選(C),後來看到正確答案才發現錯在哪兒?

將此題兩個選項還原:

C. For the last five years the Dutch economy has grown faster than Britain, France, and Germany have grown, and the unemployment rate has remained below the unemployeement rate of the other three countries.

E. For the last five years the Dutch economy has grown faster than the economies of Britain, France, and Germany have grown, and the unemployment rate has remained well below the unemployeement rate of the other three countries.

請〝硬梆梆〞比較,主詞對主詞,動詞對動詞。
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文章SELVICHY » 2005-11-13 17:41

ABC不用贅述了.
DE只能從句意判斷,
with並不會造成與德國等國家連用的問題,
如果有人看成這樣,那可能是還不清楚with的用法.
with表示與主句之主動詞搭配之伴隨動作或狀況,
從句意判斷,現在要比較的是兩個東西,
一是經濟成長,二是失業率,
兩個是平行地位,非主從關係,
如果用with,就變成失業率的起伏會跟著經濟成長跑,
那就背離原意了.
另外,D中的that子句修飾unemployment,你可以把它省略不看,
最後變成with the unemployment rate單獨存在.
這是什麼意思?完全無意義的句子,且不符合with伴隨動作的文法表達.
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文章vivid » 2005-11-18 00:56

把d帶入
For the last five years the Dutch economy has grown faster than the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained well below that of the other three countries.
^^^ ^^^
可否說這兩個that 所帶之物不同所以錯
前者說的是Dutch的失業率
後者說的是另三國的失業率
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文章FannyHsieh » 2006-03-16 19:36

我最後是DE決選,選了E:)

D. the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained
E. the economies of Britain, France, and Germany, and the unemployment rate has remained

D: 三個國家的economy為同一個去比,怪怪的
E: 各別的economy,所以為複數

我最主要選E是覺得因為E在逗號後面出現了and,剛好,and the unemployment rate has remained有平衡到題目的the Dutch economy has grown
再來檢查一開始的主詞為Dutch,再看the unemployment rate.....other three countries,unemployment rate看句意是德國的,所以我選了它

vivid \$m[1]:把d帶入
For the last five years the Dutch economy has grown faster than the economy of Britain, France, and Germany, with the unemployment rate that has remained well below that of the other three countries.
^^^ ^^^
可否說這兩個that 所帶之物不同所以錯
前者說的是Dutch的失業率
後者說的是另三國的失業率


我覺得一個句子有這麼多that一方面很混亂一方面也很囉唆所以沒選
而且我認為不用that也可以很清楚是unemployment rate has remained,再用that子句就不夠簡潔了:Q
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文章Ace » 2006-04-07 10:16

我覺得用economy的單複數去解題可以說的清
但是若對照沒畫線部分的 well below that of other three countries
就代表其實economy可以用單數....
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文章keane0727 » 2007-03-21 01:12

單數的economy有後面未劃線的rate支持,
E中the unemployment rate是指什麼?一般我們用冠詞the+名詞是因為文章之前已出現過該名詞,或者已對名詞限定如the nuclear power plant in Germany?

D中的with好像更能表示the unemployment rate是附屬在Dutch economy上的
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文章mandy-lo » 2007-05-13 15:06

FannyHsieh:再來檢查一開始的主詞為Dutch,
再看the unemployment rate.....other three countries,
unemployment rate看句意是德國的,所以我選了它


這裡的句意明顯是Dutch的經濟與失業率跟另外三個國家再比較,
所以我不認為第二句的the unemployment rate 是指德國哦…
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