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[問題]天山4-4

文章訪客 » 2004-12-24 17:27

天山 4-4

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became thefirst woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant lifeand landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist whobecame the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about thepeasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to writeromantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories aboutthe peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wroteromantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

Ans:D
我選Dㄋㄟ????
有點轉不過來的感覺
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文章micht » 2004-12-24 19:29

A) in 1909 雙向修飾
B) ",and" 有問題 as well as 沒比"also"好
C) 囉唆 in addition 不好
D) 用 "also"好

"同位語_______, N ___________

E) 同 A


大致看到的錯誤 請指教
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文章josephko » 2004-12-24 20:17

我覺得是C 耶
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文章訪客 » 2004-12-24 20:19

我選A啦 ,,,
打錯了
micht,可不可在多講一下A這個雙向修飾的錯誤??
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文章micht » 2004-12-24 20:24

Turning away from literary realism to.................., in 1909...........became thefirst woman

到底 1909 發生前面的事 or 後面的事?

我感覺有雙向修飾
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文章訪客 » 2004-12-25 12:05

誰能在確定一下,A是否真的雙向修飾或者另有他錯
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文章訪客 » 2005-01-10 21:23

我越看越像OG這一題,但我還是解釋不出個所以然
請大家在激盪一下

261. Being a United States citizen since 1988 and born in Calcutta in 1940. author Bharati Mukherjee has lived in England and Canada, and first came to the United States in 1961 to study at the Iowa Writers' Workshop.
(A) Being a United States citizen since 1988 and born in Calcutta in 1940, author Bharati Mukherjee has
(B) Having been a United States citizen since 1988, she was born in Calcutta in 1940; author Bharati Mukherjee
(C) Born in Calcutta in 1940, author Bharati Mukherjee became a United States citizen in 1988; she has
(D) Being born in Calcutta in 1940 and having been a United States citizen since 1988, author Bharati Mukherjee
(E) Having been born in Calcutta in 1940 and being a United States citizen since 1988, author Bharati Mukherjee
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Re: [問題]天山4-4

文章chunjuwu » 2005-01-11 12:07

[quote="mikelee"][size=16]天山 4-4

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerl was the novelist who became thefirst woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant lifeand landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerl was the novelist whobecame the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about thepeasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to writeromantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories aboutthe peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerl turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

A 有問題:whobecame the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer 第一個女人,這說不通吧。


D很好 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer ,
woman 和 Swedish 同樣去修飾writer ,第一個女作家,這才對。

E有問題:from literary realism ,沒有to 這怪怪的 B,也是

c的in addition to 根本不能選吧

請指教
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文章訪客 » 2005-01-12 21:15

ㄟ.....這邊的the first woman應該是翻做第一夫人吧
這樣解釋有點怪怪的,,,,
可以說的在詳細一點嗎??
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文章chunjuwu » 2005-01-13 10:05

mikelee \$m[1]:ㄟ.....這邊的the first woman應該是翻做第一夫人吧
這樣解釋有點怪怪的,,,,
可以說的在詳細一點嗎??


the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer

作者是意思應是,第一位女性作家,和第一位瑞士的作家
可是你看A選項,and 後面有個was ,那變成first woman 不能去修飾
writer 了,句意變得怪怪。變成第一位女性,可是沒有人會這樣講吧。

應該是D選項
became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer

first woman 和first Swedish 是adj ,一同修飾writer,

第一夫人贏得Nobel ,這說不太通。而且,我印象中,第一夫人應該是
First Lady ,還是First Woman ,好像要大寫。
你可再check 一下。

這樣有比較清楚嗎

A選項可以再看詳細一點喔。
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Re: [問題]天山4-4

文章DARY » 2005-04-22 03:21

chunjuwu \$m[1]:
mikelee \$m[1]:[size=16]天山 4-4

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerl was the novelist who became thefirst woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

A. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant lifeand landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerl was the novelist whobecame the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about thepeasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C. Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to writeromantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories aboutthe peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerl turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

A 有問題:whobecame the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer 第一個女人,這說不通吧。


D很好 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer ,
woman 和 Swedish 同樣去修飾writer ,第一個女作家,這才對。

E有問題:from literary realism ,沒有to 這怪怪的 B,也是

c的in addition to 根本不能選吧

請指教


我又昏了....
Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
最後的to win是怎麼來的啊!?
還是去睡吧!! |-)
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文章Calvin » 2005-04-22 03:25

"the first ...... to V " 是很常見的用法

應該可以找到很多這樣子的用法

FYI
有一些無聲的話語,只有尋夢的人,彼此才聽得懂
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Re: [問題]天山4-4

文章yotoan » 2005-07-04 16:48

[quote="chunjuwu"][quote="mikelee"][size=16]天山 4-4

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerl was the novelist who became thefirst woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

D. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories aboutthe peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E. As a novelist, Selma Lagerl turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won

D很好 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer ,
woman 和 Swedish 同樣去修飾writer ,第一個女作家,這才對。

E有問題:from literary realism ,沒有to 這怪怪的 B,也是


謝謝各位大大..
但我作到這題是選(E)
可否請教高手思路指導我下列疑點..

1.a novelist who...這不是限定用法嗎??
為何不用the novelist who...
用As a novelist有什麼不好嗎??
2.from literary realism ,沒有to(???)
我覺得這裡不是from A to B的用法...(D)是from N to V..
所以我覺得E也沒什麼不好..
3.....,in 1909修飾becoming我覺得ok啊..請教如何看出雙向修飾?
4.若我硬要選E,請問這裡的in 1909 becoming可否解成由輕到重?
即As a novelist, S.L (in 1909 becoming the first....Literature ) turned away from...and wrote romantic...Sweden.

;-$ 感恩先了!!
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文章yotoan » 2005-07-05 19:51

沒人理偶..自己頂一下...麻煩大大啦!!
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文章cocaine » 2005-07-05 20:15

1.a novelist who...這不是限定用法嗎??
為何不用the novelist who...
用As a novelist有什麼不好嗎??
2.from literary realism ,沒有to(???)
我覺得這裡不是from A to B的用法...(D)是from N to V..
所以我覺得E也沒什麼不好..
3.....,in 1909修飾becoming我覺得ok啊..請教如何看出雙向修飾?
4.若我硬要選E,請問這裡的in 1909 becoming可否解成由輕到重?
即As a novelist, S.L (in 1909 becoming the first....Literature ) turned away from...and wrote romantic...Sweden


1. a novelist who 跟 the novelist who 都是限定用法,只是前者無指定,後者有指定.
2. 此題不是from A to B,而是turn...(away from).. to...
3. E. in 1909我個人覺得無雙向修飾,錯誤在becoming分詞修飾前面太多歧意.
4. E.turned away from literary realism and wrote romanti stories
turned and wrote改變原來句意變成平形用法
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