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It often raises great debates among people about the subject whether ____ due to its complexity. Everybody hold different view about the issue. Some people tend to ____; however, the other people are inclined to _____. Personally, I prefer ____rather than _____, and the supporting details and reasons will be presented as the following.

First of all, _____. For instance, _____.Besides,______.

Moreover, ______. For example,_____.

Last but not least,_____. For example, .

To sum up, judging from the evidence of________, I will be in favor of ____as far as I am concerned.