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Q34:
Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

答案 : B

<D> 偶覺得她 對稱的狠漂亮耶.....想請問為啥錯 ?
是 the rates are about the same ....單複數的問題
還是 上述的錯誤不成立 , 而是因為<D>兩個句子前後的連貫性不大 (改變A的句意 , A 中subject為 people <---偶是根據這個原因挑B的 ^o) )
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帖子agk99 » 2004-09-10 20:59

沒有必要用被動的
而且被動就看不出是誰愛吃肥胖食物的
雖然我們都知是人吃的
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agk99 \$m[1]:沒有必要用被動的
而且被動就看不出是誰愛吃肥胖食物的
雖然我們都知是人吃的



agk gg , 所以 B可以算是慣用語法 ,是嗎 ? :-#
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帖子saikang » 2004-12-10 16:54

那 (e)呢 ? 沒有被動的問題, 是簡潔的緣故嗎 ?
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saikang :

E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

i think the BF ' is unideomatic and wordy.:)
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帖子odinhsu » 2004-12-11 08:01

the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States

rate和united states是不一樣的東西阿...怎麼比?
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帖子bugubugu » 2004-12-15 02:29

odinhsu \$m[1]:the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States

rate和united states是不一樣的東西阿...怎麼比?


D我覺得是改變句意...
因為rate單數...
所以變成法國和美國合起來吃fatty foods的比例....
是一個數目字而已而不是原題的要表達的....
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帖子micht » 2005-01-01 01:33

odinhsu \$m[1]:the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States

rate和united states是不一樣的東西阿...怎麼比?


同意 odinhsu...

一個rate?? or two rates??

the rates of fatty foods consumed in France and US??
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micht \$m[1]:
odinhsu \$m[1]:the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States

rate和united states是不一樣的東西阿...怎麼比?


同意 odinhsu...

一個rate?? or two rates??

the rates of fatty foods consumed in France and US??


同意 就是unclear :)
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帖子micht » 2005-01-01 01:48

轉 iamdior 的問題

抱歉抱歉 忘了劃線..感謝
我都有看過精華區了
不過精華區討論的點跟我想問的不大一樣
沒有討論到B
看了還是不確定該如何解這題
所以想麻煩大家


B不需在US前+in媽? 還是US這邊指的是人
US是和France平行 還是和people in France呢?

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帖子micht » 2005-01-01 01:55

micht \$m[1]:轉 iamdior 的問題

抱歉抱歉 忘了劃線..感謝
我都有看過精華區了
不過精華區討論的點跟我想問的不大一樣
沒有討論到B
看了還是不確定該如何解這題
所以想麻煩大家


B不需在US前+in媽? 還是US這邊指的是人
US是和France平行 還是和people in France呢?

謝謝


B)people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the



把France and the United States 當作集合 noun...
法國和美國兩地之人

People in France and in United States
可是這樣的話 "in France" and "in United States" 共同修飾people

people人可以同時在 法國合美國嗎? ^o)
不知道這樣想是否通
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帖子josephko » 2005-01-01 02:52

To Micht:
Regarding this question , please refer to OG 53 and OG187 ,
BTW , 最近看你跟 Trish8m 都在做些統整的資料, 很感動
可以找一找此題相關: 比較的省略
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帖子micht » 2005-01-01 03:31

josephko \$m[1]:To Micht:
Regarding this question , please refer to OG 53 and OG187 ,
BTW , 最近看你跟 Trish8m 都在做些統整的資料, 很感動
可以找一找此題相關: 比較的省略


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帖子micht » 2005-01-01 04:40

josephko \$m[1]:To Micht:
Regarding this question , please refer to OG 53 and OG187 ,
BTW , 最近看你跟 Trish8m 都在做些統整的資料, 很感動
可以找一找此題相關: 比較的省略


Here are the questions that Joseph referred to.

187. In one of the bloodiest battles of the Civil War, fought at Sharpsburg, Maryland, on September 17, 1862, four times as many Americans were killed as would later be killed on the beaches of Normandy during D-Day.

(A) Americans were killed as
(B) Americans were killed than
(C) Americans were killed than those who
(D) more Americans were killed as there
(E) more Americans were killed as those who

Ans: A

53. There is no consensus on what role, if any, is played by acid rain in slowing the growth or damaging forests in the eastern United States.

(A) slowing the growth or damaging
(B) the damage or the slowing of the growth of
(C) the damage to or the slowness of the growth of
(D) damaged or slowed growth of
(E) damaging or slowing the growth of

Ans: E
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帖子micht » 2005-01-01 04:44

Joseph的意思是說省略主詞嚕?

B) people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the

那就表示是 people in France and those in the United States...
我怎麼感覺仍然不通 people 可以在France又同時在US??? ^o)

can someone help? thanks
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