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[lucyyeh]

"King of Blue" was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales which many critics and musicians consider the most important of Miles Davis' work.
(A)"King of Blue" was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales which many critics and musicians consider the most important of Miles Davis' work
(B)"King of Blue", which was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales, is considered as the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.
(C)"King of Blue", which was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales, is considered the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.
(D) The first jazz album to utilize modal scales, "King of Blue" is considered by many critics and musicians the most important of Miles Davis' work.
(E) The first jazz album to utilize modal scales, "King of Blue" is considered to be the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.

正確答案為D
大家覺得不選E的原因如何?
書上的解答我覺得跟字典裡看到的，還有我在其他地方看到的有點不一樣。
consider to be 似乎也不是錯的用法?
E是因為不夠簡潔嗎?

[kotokolin]

(D) The first jazz album to utilize modal scales, "King of Blue" is considered by many critics and musicians the most important of Miles Davis' work.

(E) The first jazz album to utilize modal scales, "King of Blue" is considered to be the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.

lucy可有看到(E)的by many critics and musicians的位子哩? 還要繼續說嘛

為了簡潔, consider O to be OC 的to be很喜歡省略變成consider O OC,
我忘記OC哪一題有, 你可以去翻一下OG的說法

[dibert8]

(E) 裡的 by many critics and musicians 會造成修飾歧異
i.e. 修飾 work? important? 還是 considered?

to be 的確是經常省略的.

[dibert8]

(A)"King of Blue" was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales which many critics and musicians consider the most important of Miles Davis' work
=> 時態不一致

(B)"King of Blue" , which was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales, is considered as the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.
=>扭曲主軸句意; consider 不用 as

(C)"King of Blue" , which was the first jazz album to utilize modal scales, is considered the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.
=>扭曲主軸句意; by... 有修飾歧異

(D) The first jazz album to utilize modal scales, "King of Blue" is considered by many critics and musicians the most important of Miles Davis' work.
=> by... 佔著標準的修飾位置

(E) The first jazz album to utilize modal scales, "King of Blue" is considered to be the most important of Miles Davis' work by many critics and musicians.
=> to be 多餘; by... 有修飾歧異

[lucyyeh]

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