[問題] GWD 17-29

[cimim]

Q29:
Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

A.and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing

B.and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing

C.as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing

D.and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized

E.but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of


答案 是 D 我選B
D的 with which=> which 不會有指涉不清的問題嗎 ???

[Kyo]

這題沒有因果關係呀A跟B就不會對了

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized these indignities.

這樣有解答關於which的疑問嗎?

[cimim]

這題沒有因果關係呀A跟B就不會對了

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized these indignities.

這樣有解答關於which的疑問嗎?

那請問一下 which 代替誰 ?

[peche]

the eloquence and passion

[chocola]

Q29:
Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

A.and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing

B.and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing

C.as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing

D.and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized

E.but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of


答案 是 D 我選B
D的 with which=> which 不會有指涉不清的問題嗎 ???

這題我原本也選B
我想請問B的錯誤點
1.是不是在that往前推沒有東西可以代,因為後面的it已經指前面的"A Vindication of the Rights of Woman "

2.是不是後面的"when exposing and criticizing"修飾對象不清楚?

[howhow]

我想請問B的錯誤點
1.是不是在that往前推沒有東西可以代,因為後面的it已經指前面的"A Vindication of the Rights of Woman "

in that=because 改變句意啦

[causeiam]

B) in that it XXXXX
that, it 指代錯誤。

A) and because xxxx
and 前後沒有對等

ans: D
正確的答案句意一定合理，不過還是要從明顯文法錯誤刪起..（個人小心得）

[ergh]

可是依句意來看，我覺得it指Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman好像比較通ㄟ， with which不是受格關代嗎？eloquence and passion 自己 exposed and criticized自己嗎？
這樣來看，it指 eloquence and passion不是很怪嗎？

[hccill]

在這邊,its就像你說的是指Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman,所以it也是指Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman
(同一句子裡代名詞指代要相同喔~)

which在這裡也是受格沒錯,which=the eloquence and passion

後半段的原句應該為:it exposed and criticized these indignities with the eloquence and passion

open to discuss~

有錯請指正喔~

[pimi]

如果回復句型是it exposed and criticized these indignities with the eloquence and passion

那原本的"in" the eloquence and passion的in跑去哪啦?? 請大大解答~~

[dibert8]

是兩句的組合:
Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and in the eloquence and passion.
Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman exposed and criticized with the eloquence and passion.

[nomade]

想請問一下這題C選項
C. as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing
的錯誤點
是因為it had多餘嗎?

還是as well as 沒有比and來得好

[dibert8]

as well as =/= and
as well as (prep.) 在 GMAT 最好不要視為對等連接詞
所以 (C) 裡的 as well as 修飾 women, 句意不合理.

from Merriam-Webster
as well as
[conjunction]
: and in addition : and <brave as well as loyal>
[preposition]
: in addition to : besides <the coach, as well as the team, is ready>

[DoDoPrac]

(A)(B)是不是it的使用怪...
也就是it若指代A Vindication of the Rights of Woman,
說它eloquent and passionate不太正確吧
畢竟以上兩個形容詞應形容人才是...

我覺得(D)很平行對稱
也就是was unprecedented (in its firsthandaccounts) of... and (in the eloquence and passion) with...
且with which表示it擁有這些特質(比A,B好), exposed and criticized平行對稱,作為it的動作也很清楚

[angela_yj0424]

A.B錯，不平衡，且如果是句子並列的話，少主句
E錯，沒有not only…所以E but also錯
C.D比較︰D 平衡in.... and in....且Verb優
C時態錯，不可能用had
所以選D