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文章mandy-lo » 2007-05-13 15:04

GWD-11-30
tsaowen大大:ETS舉例愛用的such as (OG裡幾乎都是連在一起,有分開過嗎? ^o) )

【OG189】這裡ETS認為such purposes as比other purposes such as要effective哦..
其實還有188,223題未劃線的部份也是such as分開,大家參考參考

Proponents of artificial intelligence say they will be able to make computers that can understand English and other human languages, recognize objects, and reason as an expert does-computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these.
(A) as an expert does--computers that will be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan, or other purposes such as these
(B) as an expert does, which may be used for purposes such as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan
(C) like an expert--computers that will be used for such purposes as diagnosing equipment breakdowns or deciding whether to authorize a loan
(D) like an expert, the use of which would be for purposes like the diagnosis of equipment breakdowns or the decision whether or not a loan should be authorized
(E) like an expert, to be used to diagnose equipment breakdowns, deciding whether to authorize a loan or not, or the like

A correct sentence must maintain parallel structure. In choice A, the three-part series (to diagnose ..., deciding,... or other purposes ...) lacks parallelism. C, the best choice, replaces A's third element with/or such purposes as; this phrase functions as a stem for the other two elements, which are recast as two parallel phrases--diagnosing ... or deciding .... Thus, choice C not only manages the parallel structure but avoids the less effective other purposes such as these at the end of choice A. Choice E uses faulty parallel structure (to be used..., deciding ..., or the like). In B and D, which and the use of which introduce sentence elements that lack antecedents or reference. In addition, D is wordy.
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文章ggethan » 2007-08-26 16:04

我想問一下 such as中的as是介詞嗎

如果是的話 那such as by應該直接刪掉 因為介詞不能加介詞

有人能回答一下嗎
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文章chencraig0227 » 2007-12-31 15:34

您用兩個介系詞來刪..我認為危險了點...在多配合一個平行原則比較妥當!!

用平行看such as A,B and C 來看 by是多餘。
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文章iamlb » 2008-06-05 11:38

莫老師上課是說A沒錯,
D的選項他說了兩點,
1. in accordance with跟according to比較起來太囉嗦
2. such as不分開比較好
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