[討論]SC885SSC885-補充題-2 NO.35=>語意重組

[訪客]

35. A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.

(A) A star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole after it passes through a red giant stage, depending on mass.

(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

(C) After passing through a red giant stage, a star’s mass will determine if it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

(E) The mass of a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will determine whether it compresses itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

I want to discuss how to you solve this quesiton.
I often get confused about this and do wrong all the time.

[agk99]

就句意來選，但坦白說，大多數時候我也看不懂句意
下策就是用文法概念及語感來挑
A it 指代不清
B 保留
c 所有格用法錯誤(但刪的很勉強)
D 保留
E it指代不清
BD選 一個 看到b 平衡做的太差，簡單說就是"長的太醜"

看了五分鐘，咬了牙棄b選d

[illuna]

就句意來選，但坦白說，大多數時候我也看不懂句意
下策就是用文法概念及語感來挑
A it 指代不清
B 保留
c 所有格用法錯誤(但刪的很勉強)
D 保留
E it指代不清
BD選 一個 看到b 平衡做的太差，簡單說就是"長的太醜"

看了五分鐘，咬了牙棄b選d

為什麼要刪掉我的BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB啊......

我提出一個考點供大家參考.....

A star depend on mass可以換成Mass determines a star嗎?

我覺得答案是不行......歡迎討論.....

[agk99]

B與D的差異，真的很小
你看我若是在上機考的時候，嘿嘿，我也不知我會選多少
看了五分鐘耶，考試豈能如此折磨

[agk99]

忘了問，答案是多少

[訪客]

D

[魚]

我選B 但是同意 答案為 D

最近沉溺於分詞 ,腦袋一十偏掉了

[illuna]

我選B 但是同意 答案為 D

最近沉溺於分詞 ,腦袋一十偏掉了

偏在哪可以為我分析一下B的錯嗎?

麻煩魚mm囉.... :-$

[魚]

[size=18]35. [u].

(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

(D) Mass determines whether a star, after passing through the red giant stage, will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

報告 , 以前我打死都不可能選 ( B ) , 因為以前程度更差的時候 , 直接將這類

兩個分詞並列形容 S 的句型打X ,僥倖混過

最近 , 開始整理楊 X難句 , 以及跟大家做GWD , 看到這類型的句子越來越多, 因為
程度還是不夠,答題時反而更猶豫不決.

<B > 我無法判讀出她的文法有不合宜的地方.
不過檢討句意 ,確有很大的漏洞.
After depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

星星在depending on她的mass之後 , 決定變成a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.

D 的句意則是 , mass 是決定的關鍵

關於 B ,.還有什麼 可以pick up 的地方,就拜託大家提點嚕 ~

[Grace]

(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.


B 選項 depending on its mass 分詞擺放位置不洽當, its很容易讓讀者誤解為a red giant stage, 實際上應該是指a star. 而且depeding on its mass的主詞不明確, 造成語意
的ambiguity.

以上請多多指教~

[魚]

(B) After passing through a red giant stage, depending on its mass, a star will compress itself into a white dwarf, a neutron star, or a black hole.


B 選項 depending on its mass 分詞擺放位置不洽當, its很容易讓讀者誤解為a red giant stage, 實際上應該是指a star. 而且depeding on its mass的主詞不明確, 造成語意
的ambiguity.

以上請多多指教~

depending on its mass 分詞擺放位置不洽當, its很容易讓讀者誤解為a red giant stage, 實際上應該是指a star. :o

grace ^^ , 我也覺得他的位置放得不好, 但是, 對照 vivian貼的分詞代替連接詞的帖　, 我覺得, its 指代題目主詞 (a start )在此清楚, 應該不會造成ambiguity才對啊
~~ 最近愈念愈糊 ,大概是快要有大進步了吧 :P
拜託 Grace mm ,幫忙提點一下嚕

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[illuna]

我覺得答案(B)是不是可以寫成以下的形式....

After (a star省略毫無疑問) passing through a red giant stage, (which) depending on its mass, .........

問題出現在這邊which可以表示前面after一整句話.....同時也可以指代a red gaint stage....

當which指代前面after一整句話的時候....its=a star's

當which指代a red gaint stage的時候....its=a red gaint stage's

grace MM的意思是不是這樣呢??

個人雞婆請指教....

[訪客]

I agree Illun's opnion.
It is possibel that "its" means a red gaint stage's or a star.
Reader need to spend other time to figure out what "its" mean.
In D, we find this is so clear than B.
That's not 雞婆, Illuna.
We need to find the truth.

[chenyi826]

我認為是D。
ITS指涉不明。