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[問題]OG-Q241

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[問題]OG-Q241

文章bugubugu » 2005-01-03 22:01

As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the
solar wind.
(A) As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream
(B) Besides heat and light, also the Sun is the source of a continuous stream
(C) Besides heat and light, the Sun is also the source of a continuous streaming
(D) The Sun is the source not only of heat and light, but also of a continuous stream
(E) The Sun is the source of not only heat and light but, as well, of a continuous streaming

Answer to Question 241
Choice D, the best answer, has no modification errors and uses parallel phrases to complete the idiomatic
construction not only ... but also. Choices A, B, and C have modification errors: As well as heat and light and
Besides heat and light cannot logically modify the Sun, the nearest noun, as grammar requires them to do.
This misdirected modification suggests that heat and light are also (in addition to the Sun) a source of the solar
wind. Choice B may be faulted for the awkward word order of also the Sun, while C unnecessarily uses
streaming rather than the more straightforward stream. Choice E fails to use parallel phrases in the idiomatic
construction not only x ... but [also] y: of should not appear before not only if it appears after but, and but also is preferable to but. Finally, the use of the gerund streaming rather than the more straightforward noun stream
is needlessly awkward.

這裡的

Choices A, B, and C have modification errors: As well as heat and light and
Besides heat and light cannot logically modify the Sun, the nearest noun, as grammar requires them to do.
This misdirected modification suggests that heat and light are also (in addition to the Sun) a source of the solar
wind.



是說用As well as及Besides的話...
會讓人以為除了Sun以外...
heat and light也是a source of the solar
wind嗎?

不過這題不好選耶...
因為完全沒想到它要講的是a source of heat and light...
我能想到的就是Sun不等於 heat and light...
而是a source of heat and light...
不過這也是看完解答後才恍然大悟的....
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Re: [問題]OG-Q241

文章 » 2005-01-03 22:06

bugubugu \$m[1]:As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream of atomic particles known as the
solar wind.
(A) As well as heat and light, the Sun is the source of a continuous stream
(B) Besides heat and light, also the Sun is the source of a continuous stream
(C) Besides heat and light, the Sun is also the source of a continuous streaming
(D) The Sun is the source not only of heat and light, but also of a continuous stream
(E) The Sun is the source of not only heat and light but, as well, of a continuous streaming

這裡的

Choices A, B, and C have modification errors: As well as heat and light and
Besides heat and light cannot logically modify the Sun, the nearest noun, as grammar requires them to do.
This misdirected modification suggests that heat and light are also (in addition to the Sun) a source of the solar
wind.



是說用As well as及Besides的話...
會讓人以為除了Sun以外...
heat and light也是a source of the solar
wind嗎?

對啊 A╱B的句意就是醬 ^^

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文章davidlee0222 » 2005-01-09 23:45

本提是句意題
太陽除了光和熱以外
還有XXX

如果用as well as或besides
會變成光和熱與太陽同地位
光和熱也會發出太陽風
因此ABC都錯

只有DE
not only必接but also無任何例外
E的as well不知為何物
還用兩逗號隔開真是夠了

D完整平衡
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文章dianechiu » 2007-10-13 01:10

不好意思 有個小問題
就是(A)as well as heat and light,...
(B)(C)besides heat and light,...
是句意錯誤
如果不管句意的話,他們的文法對嗎?
adv.+N,S+V? adv.+N修飾S?不知道為什麼一直覺得怪怪的...
可以請大家幫我解釋文法一下嗎?謝謝 :laugh
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文章dibert8 » 2007-10-13 07:59

(A) (B) (C) 都是以介係詞片語開頭,邏輯上無法合理地修飾主詞 Sun (i.e. 脫節)
OG 的解釋,把修飾的邏輯當成文法的要求.
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