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帖子pimi » 2007-09-25 13:09

During the early years of European settlement on a continent that was viewed as "wilderness" by the new comers, Native Americans, intimately knowing the ecology of the land, were a help in the rescuing of many Pilgrims and pioneers from hardship, or even death.
(A)Native Americans, intimately knowing the ecology of the land, were a help in the rescuing of
(B)Native Americans knew the ecology and the land intimately and this enabled them to help in the rescue of
(C)Native Americans, with their intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land, helped to rescue
(D)having intomate knowledge of the ecology of the land, Native Americans helped the rescue of
(E)knowing intimately the ecology of the land, Native Americans helped to rescue

Ans:C

想請問OG解釋B選項, 如下:
B creates an awkward, redundant, fused sentence in which the first clause has to be repeated in the vague this of the seceond clause; furthermore, the comma required before and in larger compound sentences is omitted.

為何在and前要加逗點????? *-)
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帖子dibert8 » 2007-09-28 01:08

this 意指前句,使得 and 在句子裡又含一句,複合句必須以逗點分開,使得一個逗點裡只有一句.
其實, this 要指代句子,必須另起一句.
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帖子Arlene » 2007-09-30 15:27

Native Americans knew the ecology and the land and this enabled them to help...

第一個and平衡兩個名詞:the ecology, the land
第二個and平衡兩個句子:Native Americans knwe ...., this enabled them....
如果在第二個and前面不加『,』會不知道第一個and的平衡到底結束了沒

而且在AT中代名詞只能替代名詞,不可以代替整句,所以這裡的this不可以代替前面一整句話,要表示因果關係的時候通常用分詞搆句來表示(參考老鷹離開了,結果帶來了一些野鳥那一題)

open to discuss...
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帖子pimi » 2007-11-08 10:55

請問C選項裡的their不會有指代不輕的問題嗎???
例如their可能是代newcomers也可能是代native Americans......
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帖子dibert8 » 2007-11-09 04:06

代名詞指代原則: 1. 優先代替主詞, 2. 就近指代.
這一題適用第二原則.
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帖子gman » 2008-07-03 11:58

今天做到這題,翻出來問一下,請問一下正確答案C

(C)Native Americans, with their intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land, helped to rescue

with their intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land 在這邊修飾 Native Americans 表一個附帶狀況,但對於後面的helped 不會造成雙向修飾的問題嗎?

或者 句子改成這樣 Native Americans with their intimate knowledge of the ecology of the land ,helped to rescue ...也通嗎?

又或者他就只是一個伴隨狀況,去掉也沒差咧?

每次碰到有with在句中都會讓我想很久... ;-S
麻煩各位NN解答了,很慌阿,我的破文法....
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帖子gman » 2008-07-03 22:20

救命...善心人士幫幫忙解答一下吧...
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帖子whoisallan » 2008-07-04 19:46

你可以找幾題with是相向修飾的考題來看看嗎? 這題所有的選項沒有一個跟雙向修飾有關...
比較常看到的選項是以下幾種
with+N+Ved/ing
when....
of+N....
分詞構句
考 with平衡
or 介係詞用法
除了平衡或介係詞, 我覺得其他的很難單從with判定是對錯
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