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文章dibert8 » 2007-06-18 03:09

modern \$m[1]:老管的學生說C選項印錯
應改為
C: but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with
所以才會是C對

我上google查過原文 確實前面是用 "but they do create sounds" 這句話做頭
整句原文前面還有 " unlike human beings, dolphins......."


這樣會不會比較好: (C) but they do create sounds, a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks produced by

1. create, produce 的意思一樣 => redundancy?
2. with 有修飾的問題:
but they do create sounds, {producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks} with...
but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and {clicks with...}
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文章dibert8 » 2007-06-18 03:33

(A) 主動詞不一致
(B) 冒號之後的句子重述/擴張前句
(C) produce 出現兩次 => 不簡潔; producing 修飾哪個?
(D) being 不簡潔;漏了 by
(E) but 要接完整的句子

如果題目不改,看起來 (B) 似乎比較可接受.雖然 with 有修飾歧異,但在句意可理解的範圍之內.
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文章chris8888 » 2007-11-07 15:47

A: nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks are produced by 應該要解釋前面的名詞sounds, 另外but和nevertheless 相比, but較優, 同時考慮平衡creating 與 lack不平衡
B: nevertheless creating sounds: they produce a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with semicolon應該要解釋前面的名詞sounds 另外but和nevertheless 相比, but較優, 同時考慮平衡creating 與 lack不平衡

C: but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with
D: but they do create sounds, a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks being produced being 不是好選擇
E: but nevertheless creating sounds: a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks produced by but 和 nevertheless 用在一起, 意思錯了

這是正確的答案選項. 應該C對.
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文章小花 » 2007-11-11 16:37

dibert8 \$m[1]:
modern \$m[1]:老管的學生說C選項印錯
應改為
C: but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with
所以才會是C對

我上google查過原文 確實前面是用 "but they do create sounds" 這句話做頭
整句原文前面還有 " unlike human beings, dolphins......."


這樣會不會比較好: (C) but they do create sounds, a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks produced by

1. create, produce 的意思一樣 => redundancy?
2. with 有修飾的問題:
but they do create sounds, {producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks} with...
but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and {clicks with...}



Dolphins lack vocal cords,but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with sphincter muscles inside the blowhole

五個選項通通都有 create, produce 所以只得選C了
producing應該是修飾create sounds(詳見OG11 th 24題)

用with滿合理的
藉由sphincter muscles 發出whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks 聲音

Collins的解釋
With
If you do something with a particular tool, object, or substance, you do it using that tool, object, or substance.
EX1. Remove the meat with a fork and divide it among four plates...
EX2. Doctors are treating him with the drug AZT.


詳見OG11th 78題
78. Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and Is hang like socks on a clothesline.
(A) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang
(B) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches,
whose arms and legs were hanging
(C) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, with
arms and legs hanging
(D) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging
(E) seen monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs have hung

Ans:D
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對於B選項還是有疑惑

文章小花 » 2007-11-11 21:09

B. nevertheless creating sounds: they produce a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with

對於B選項還是有疑惑
nevertheless是副詞,缺連接詞
但creating 代替連接詞

關於" :" 的問題之前有前輩查到:後面的句子可作為解釋用
看樣子B選項也很好
B選項還有什麼瑕疵呢(除了和原文不同外)




III)Introduce a second clause that summarizes, restates, explains or enlarge upon the first clause in the sentence:

Independent clause: summarizing or restating words.

例子:

We knew that he meant what he said: his eyes looked as blue and hard as steel.
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文章dibert8 » 2007-11-13 10:24

如果 (C) 是: but they do create sounds, producing a complicated system of whistles, squeaks, moans, trills, and clicks with
同意選 (C).
(A) (B) nevertheless creating sounds, ... 不選的原因在於 ', Ving...' 用法錯誤(反向考法): create sound 跟 lack vocal cords 沒有關係,不適合這個用法.
(C) create sounds = produce a complicated system of... 附加說明
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文章Kal-El » 2007-11-13 22:10

ans: C
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文章小花 » 2007-11-14 08:43

恩 !謝謝
原來是我對ing的用法沒弄清楚
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文章Kal-El » 2008-05-16 11:28

支持C: 合理伴隨.

B(X): lack & create sounds 非同時.
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文章sunnyblue13s » 2008-05-30 23:18

dibert8 \$m[1]:(A) 主動詞不一致
(B) 冒號之後的句子重述/擴張前句
(C) produce 出現兩次 => 不簡潔; producing 修飾哪個?
(D) being 不簡潔;漏了 by
(E) but 要接完整的句子

如果題目不改,看起來 (B) 似乎比較可接受.雖然 with 有修飾歧異,但在句意可理解的範圍之內.


but 沒有一定要接完整的句子吧~~!!!
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文章sunnyblue13s » 2008-05-30 23:32

Kal-El \$m[1]:支持B: 合理伴隨
C: create sounds =/= produce a complicated system of...
(發聲=/=製造複雜系統) :不合理伴隨


nevertheless 是副詞型態.....他不能做連接詞用~~所以(B)似乎是錯的~~

(C)....不合理的伴隨也似乎存在~~

(E)but nevertheless - longman的例句中有出現......排除的條件應該是creating的使用~~

我覺得這題真的很詭異ㄟ~~
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