[問題]GWD29-15

[achiachia]

GWD-29-Q15
In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.

A. with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going
B. with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes
C. with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going
D. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes
E. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going

Answer: E

請教E）的結構是什麼？最後的with表什麼意思呢？謝謝

[Penny Lee]

with 獨立分詞構句可以作為修飾全句或修飾主語

E:",selling" 分詞可以作為修飾前面全句,補充說明前句句意之不足,且根據句意判斷, "almost half going to the US"應該用來解釋前句 "selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets" 所以用with獨立分詞構據來修飾

[pimi]

那請問A選項哪裡不好???

[pimi]

ㄝ~我來自問自答, which代的子句應該要有動詞, 不該把go變成going
請問這樣想對嗎?

[dibert8]

的確, 關係代名詞必需引導完整的句子.
此外, (A) 的 which = markets 句意不合理.

[foric0822]

我個人認為這邊也考了一個重要的觀念
關係代名詞只能代替名詞，不能代替數量、事件等
這邊的which如果要解釋的通，只能代替9000 tons 不合文法

[lucyyeh]

請問D選錯是it指代不清嗎?

[阿琪]

請問D選錯是it指代不清嗎?

恩…D的it有指代模糊問題…

almost half of "it" 是指Argentina、the world’s leading exporter 、honey還是 the world’s leading exporter of honey?

結果句意應該是代selling nearly 90,000 tons ，但由於逗號隔開，更導致了 it 無法有效的指代~~~~~所以產生指代模糊且單複數問題~



因此，(d)的and在此句中也會有不適當之嫌~多餘不合適


以上參考

[lucyyeh]

回樓上阿琪，我想D選and是要的，因為後面是子句
今天白天實在有點昏頭，我現在想到，有個寫作的規則，是盡量不要shift主詞，
D選也shift了

[阿琪]

呵…誤會嚕~我當然知道後面是個子句~

我所謂的: "(d)的and在此句中也會有不適當之嫌…"(是透過句意來瞭解是否多一個and恰當與否，而非文法是否用對或用錯)

就是你說的shift主詞！(第一次聽到這種描述方式，不過傳神)…因為有了and ，所以在同一個句子中…不得不多出另一個主詞，如此而shift掉了整個句意要闡述的內容！

[allen1230]

請問 大大們~~

為什麼(E)選項要用going啊??

另外,half可以直接當代名詞嗎?? (就是可以不用half of it之類的)

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還有(A)(B)(C)的選項 / 我是用 (selling代表前面整句話)來刪掉的..

with開頭的句子也不太敢選

請問(A)(B)(C)有其他的方式可以判斷錯誤的地方嗎??

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謝謝指教了喔~~

[dibert8]

with almost half going ... 是獨立片語; half = 90,000/2 tons a year (代名詞)
(A) (B) (C) with 修飾 Argentina 不合理.
(A) which = markets 不合理
(B) (C) it 不能代數字 (90,000 tons a year)