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文章小貝貝 » 2008-05-20 13:54

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Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having gone virtually unregulated since they were developed more than 50 years ago.

(A) while at the same time they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having
(B) while at the same time introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have
(C) while they have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time, and have
(D) but introducing some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants at the same time that have
(E) but at the same time introduce some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants, having


ANS: B

選項 A B C 中 都用了 while + at the same time
但while 不就有同時的意思了嗎?
請問各位大大 B 不會有redundancy?
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文章ad264 » 2008-05-20 16:07

的確是,可是這五個選項都有at the same time.
所以忽略它吧!
Look on the bright side
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文章Kal-El » 2008-05-24 12:48

這裡while是"然而(=whereas): 相對之意", 所以不會redundant.
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文章CUGGYER » 2008-07-16 20:19

while 記得是有兩個用法,1. 時間連詞 "當", 2. 轉折語氣
這裡應該是取 第一個意思,因此d e用but改變句意

但是這題我另外有個疑問,
就是當主要子句跟子句都出現相同的代名詞時,這個代名詞可以代不同的名詞嗎?
例如本題的they

Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they (=Industrialization and modern methods)have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have gone virtually unregulated since they (=pollutants) were developed more than 50 years ago.

以OG來說,我記得句子; 句子,分號分開兩個句子,因此兩個句子的同個代名詞可以代不同名詞。但主要句子跟其受詞子句不知道是不是也能適用,還是說為了避免句意不清,而需要盡量避免。

謝謝!
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文章Philosophia » 2008-09-28 08:56

CUGGYER \$m[1]:但是這題我另外有個疑問,

就是當主要子句跟子句都出現相同的代名詞時,這個代名詞可以代不同的名詞嗎?

例如本題的they

Industrialization and modern methods of insect control have improved the standard of living around the globe while at the same time they (=Industrialization and modern methods)have introduced some 100,000 dangerous chemical pollutants that have gone virtually unregulated since they (=pollutants) were developed more than 50 years ago.

以OG來說,我記得句子; 句子,分號分開兩個句子,因此兩個句子的同個代名詞可以代不同名詞。但主要句子跟其受詞子句不知道是不是也能適用,還是說為了避免句意不清,而需要盡量避免。

謝謝!


同一個句子之中同一種代名詞只能代相同的東西,所以這題的正確答案為 B
在主詞相同為前提下,while 常接 non-finite clause(見於 Collins Cobuild English Usage P519),也巧妙的避開了錯誤,而 that clause 又正確的修飾 pollutants
也就是說未劃線部分的 they 所代的是其主詞,they = what = pollutants

註:在主詞相同為前提下,while 接 non-finite clause,在 OG 中不常見,目前只找到 OG11th Q134.或許因為其主詞必須相同,比較不合適 SC 句子的鋪陳,亦無法展現 AT 所偏好的 parallelism.
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