gwd 28-21

[stilalala]

28-21: According to entomologists, single locusts are quiet creatures, but when locusts are placed with others of their species, they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.A: when locusts are placed with others of their species,
B: when placing them with others of their species, then
C: locusts, when placed with others of their species,
D: placing them with others of their species,
E: placed with others of their species, then


答案A
我對A沒有任何意見
但是我想要跟大家討論看看E選項
一開始我其實選到E
在看過一次題目之後,覺得A是絕對沒有問題的
但是關於E
我想要知道是哪裡錯了

不知道是不是placed with ...,then they....
這邊的They會變的不清楚
還有then,在這裡應該是不需要的

想聽聽大家的看法
謝謝

[uioxcv]

28-21: According to entomologists, single locusts are quiet creatures, but when locusts are placed with others of their species, they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.

E: placed with others of their species, then

E會使之後的代名詞they無東西可以指代~
而且then是副詞,不是連接詞,變成run-on sentence.

有錯請指教^_^

[tsaowen]

28-21: According to entomologists, single locusts are quiet creatures, but when locusts are placed with others of their species, they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.A: when locusts are placed with others of their species,
B: when placing them with others of their species, then
C: locusts, when placed with others of their species,
D: placing them with others of their species,
E: placed with others of their species, then


答案A
我對A沒有任何意見
但是我想要跟大家討論看看E選項
一開始我其實選到E
在看過一次題目之後,覺得A是絕對沒有問題的
但是關於E
我想要知道是哪裡錯了

不知道是不是placed with ...,then they....
這邊的They會變的不清楚
還有then,在這裡應該是不需要的

想聽聽大家的看法
謝謝

我覺得 be placed with 要用被動，表示被安置
如果選E but 對等連接詞不知道要平衡誰
single locusts are quiet creatures, but (single locusts 主詞重複省略)placed with others of their species, then 句意怪異
而且三個句子只有一個but當連接詞，run-on


open to discuss~

[acharlie]

28-21: According to entomologists, single locusts are quiet creatures, but when locusts are placed with others of their species, they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.A: when locusts are placed with others of their species,
B: when placing them with others of their species, then
C: locusts, when placed with others of their species,
D: placing them with others of their species,
E: placed with others of their species, then


答案A
我對A沒有任何意見
但是我想要跟大家討論看看E選項
一開始我其實選到E
在看過一次題目之後,覺得A是絕對沒有問題的
但是關於E
我想要知道是哪裡錯了

不知道是不是placed with ...,then they....
這邊的They會變的不清楚
還有then,在這裡應該是不需要的

想聽聽大家的看法
謝謝

我覺得 be placed with 要用被動，表示被安置
如果選E but 對等連接詞不知道要平衡誰
single locusts are quiet creatures, but (single locusts 主詞重複省略)placed with others of their species, then 句意怪異
而且三個句子只有一個but當連接詞，run-on


open to discuss~

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個人認為,因為這樣的話其實是脫節的句意不清
E.but placed with others of their species, then they become...

they句意來說指的是locusts,但是在E這個答案下,they就變的不清楚
我可以說是entomologists也可以說是locusts

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個人看法

[joyce0519]

[quote="stilalala"]28-21: According to entomologists, single locusts are quiet creatures, but when locusts are placed with others of their species, they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.A: when locusts are placed with others of their species,
B: when placing them with others of their species, then
C: locusts, when placed with others of their species,
D: placing them with others of their species,
E: placed with others of their species, then


答案A

我選C,想請問ㄧ下為何不對?謝謝幫忙

[mulderhou]

28-21: According to entomologists, single locusts are quiet creatures, but when locusts are placed with others of their species, they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.A: when locusts are placed with others of their species,
B: when placing them with others of their species, then
C: locusts, when placed with others of their species,
D: placing them with others of their species,
E: placed with others of their species, then


答案A

我選C,想請問ㄧ下為何不對?謝謝幫忙

我的想法 , 不確定對 , C的寫法將主詞locusts拉出來 , 再用兩個逗點來隔開when子句 , 感覺有點redundancy~~

[Jen-Cheng]

c:locusts, when placed with others of their species, become

在c中，when 引導一個子句，那主要字句就會不見，除非將"when.."看成挿入句
但是我印像中只有看過將"if"當成挿入句在用...law, if passed,....

參考看看囉

open to discuss

[bibbyshiu]

E想考獨立主格的用法.
S+分詞, S + V. : 表示兩者關係鬆散的句子.
如果S相同, 則可以變為 分詞, S+V
E答案中, 多了個then, 造成沒有主句的S+V
如果把then拿掉, 才可以選.
原句
(when they are ) placed with others of their species, they become ...

[王志元]

E想考獨立主格的用法.
S+分詞, S + V. : 表示兩者關係鬆散的句子.
如果S相同, 則可以變為 分詞, S+V
E答案中, 多了個then, 造成沒有主句的S+V
如果把then拿掉, 才可以選.
原句
(when they are ) placed with others of their species, they become ...

不懂什麼是沒有主句的S+V

[dibert8]

then 是副詞,不是連接詞,不需要主要子句.
(E) 的句意錯了: are quiet..., but placed... 也不平衡.

[chencraig0227]

如果在(E)選項句首加一個"逗號"，變成分詞構句，應該就可以了吧!

同意D老大說的，E的then是副詞，我想它應該是要考分詞構句，只是少
放了個逗號，變成就要找and平衡。

[aqboy[origen]]

請問E選項的They 可以指代 others嗎??

突然搞不清楚@@@@

另外我覺得E選項是個run-on sentence,

then是副詞 不是conj. 不能連接兩個句子吧??

@~@

[ad264]

同意A
我想E因為but後面接一個獨立句子
placed with others of their species, then they become excited, change color, vibrate, and even hum.

可以將placed 想成分詞

[angela_yj0424]

不太懂D為甚麼錯，當然them, their, they指代好像有問題，是降嗎？

[ky]

句意上需要when的存在
沒有when的都錯

(B)(D)but 後方的子句欠主語
題目畫線好像不太清楚，如果主語就是locust，主語受語相同，them一定要改themselves，所以也不會對