GWD9-39

[bear]

Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in
Germany it is just over 33 percent.
A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced
in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over
33 percent

這題答案是D還是C阿? :|

[魚]

Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in
Germany it is just over 33 percent.
A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over
33 percent

這題答案是D還是C阿? :|

什麼 這題不是選E 喔 (H)

C 是一定不好的嘛------->選C不如選A
D 我認為 whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany 跟原句的重心不同 D 選項的 in Germany
跑票了

我選E 哈哈哈 :-S

[illuna]

哈我都還不敢跟大家報告...

這題我選A :-S

[QQcandy]

在乍看之下, 我也選A, 但是細細分析, 覺得　it 有問題, 就想選　D, 因為　whereas 是連接詞, 就用平衡法, 因為　in France 擺後面, 我就給他擺後面, 所以看看就　D 啦　 　雖然也不是　１００％　平衡....

[agk99]

這題我選d

選A太危險，"感覺上"A的選項格式在ETS的認知中很少對，沒有起"比較比例"的作用
選E也是，compared在逗號後面，可以解釋的可能性太多太多了
B必錯，C又不太好，那就D

[bear]

我本來選C的....因為原本模考的時候認為D不太平衡 (沒有C的produced in Germany )

可是後來覺得從句意上看來....D好多了.....

至於E....如AGK大哥講的....的確不太好....

[魚]

拿腦袋去狀牆 X 3 之後

也同意 D 的確是比較好

[pcl12]

請問Ｃ不好的原因，除了它是反過來表示(也就是在未劃線部份說75%的能源來自核能,而c則說核能占了over 33%的能源)造成句意怪,說nuclear power占 energy多少%是很奇怪的
那如果硬要以nuclear power為開頭的話,是否改成nuclear power 提供 over 33%的能源

[cocaine]

請問Ｃ不好的原因，除了它是反過來表示(也就是在未劃線部份說75%的能源來自核能,而c則說核能占了over 33%的能源)造成句意怪,說nuclear power占 energy多少%是很奇怪的
那如果硬要以nuclear power為開頭的話,是否改成nuclear power 提供 over 33%的能源

C跟D的意義差不多..都是說核能占33%的能源..
可是D的結構比較平衡.主句跟從句都蠻平衡的.

[reohuang]

Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.

A. while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B. compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E. compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent

A.E的it...還有B的which就不多討論...比較有爭議在CD
我以為C是對的...且句意較為對稱...
都是在說明nuclear power在energy produced in France 和energy produced in Germany所佔的比例

以D來說雖然乍看之下句子結構比較對稱
但33 percent of the energy 有可能造成誤解...還在談未畫線部分的同一個主題the energy produced in France的其他來源...造成句意的改變(而且加起來還超過100%)
此外in Germany的位置也會造成歧異
是nuclear power in Germany還是energy produced in Germany?


請繼續討論~

[micht]

reo,

(C)的話那不就是 75 percent of the energy 和 nuclear power 兩個不同類在比較ㄇ
(D)就不會

句意並沒有要兩個%加在一起??

Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.

法國>75%的energy是來自nuclear power
而 德國卻只有 33% 才自於nuclear power

[agk99]

Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.

C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany

我以為C是對的...且句意較為對稱...
都是在說明nuclear power在energy produced in France 和energy produced in Germany所佔的比例

以D來說雖然乍看之下句子結構比較對稱
但33 percent of the energy 有可能造成誤解...還在談未畫線部分的同一個主題the energy produced in France的其他來源...造成句意的改變(而且加起來還超過100%)
此外in Germany的位置也會造成歧異
是nuclear power in Germany還是energy produced in Germany?

我的看法是
1.whereas有對比的意味，等於while, but in contrast，所以必須要有對比結構才行
2.試試這樣的句子，70% of the girls get 700 in GMAT tests, whereas 70% of the boys get only 490.
我想應該沒有加起來超過100%導致句意扭曲的問題
3.nuclear power in Germany還是energy produced in Germany
我認為是一樣的

[reohuang]

我的看法是
1.whereas有對比的意味，等於while, but in contrast，所以必須要有對比結構才行
2.試試這樣的句子，70% of the girls get 700 in GMAT tests, whereas 70% of the boys get only 490.
我想應該沒有加起來超過100%導致句意扭曲的問題
3.nuclear power in Germany還是energy produced in Germany
我認為是一樣的

關於第2點我的意思是D會不會有:
Over 75 percent of the energy...derives from nuclear power, whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
這樣句意改變的問題？
(跟加起來是不是100%其實沒什麼關係...這個100%的例子舉的不好...sorry ...)

[Calvin]

我支持C

理由就如rEO所說的，D雖較平衡，但句義上會有造成岐義

energy produced in Germany <------> D: Whereas .............. in Germany
我覺得是不相同的
前者是說：在德國境內生產的電力；後者in germany則可以是單純的地方副詞修飾全句，在德國有僅超過33%的能源來自核能，這麼一來這個這個能源不一定只指德國自行生產的能源，也有可能包括一些從別的國家輸入的能源---->這樣就與句子前半段energy produced in France的能源定義不一樣了

C句意相當清楚

平衡和句意清楚上，非取句意清楚者為最優先

FYI，請討論

[soami]

這題我選D

我覺得c的句意比較怪。
C. whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced
in Germany
核能發電佔了33%的能源

D. whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
33%的能源來自核能發電
再看首句
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power

75%的能源來自核能發電，D很清楚的表達能源也是來自核能發電，
應該比較好吧。