[問題]天山4-Q12

[twkevin]

Q12:
For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed,
and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of
milk each per year.

A. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
B. providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
C. provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
D. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
E. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

ans:(e)

(e) For the farmer who takes ---, provided with-- and milked---, the cows will do ----- each per year".
混這麼多種時態在理面, 由其是provide, milked => 在語意上有幫助嘛?

(a)providing them with high-energy feed, and milking
CD 上是有人講這是兩個伴隨的動作?
有這種連接兩個伴隨動作的句子嘛 ?

[cocaine]

E還原:
(while Holstein cows are) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce Attention:

[twkevin]

E還原:
(while Holstein cows are) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce Attention:

原來有省略. thanks,

[agk99]

attention是E才出現
我想請問句意上有什麼特別的地方嗎
特別是E比起其他選項

[twkevin]

attention是E才出現
我想請問句意上有什麼特別的地方嗎
特別是E比起其他選項

Sorry, 那是我用PDF轉Word不曉得從那跑出來的
我把attention刪除了

[reohuang]

Q12:
For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed,
and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.

A. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
B. providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
C. provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
D. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
E. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

ans:(e)

(e) For the farmer who takes ---, provided with-- and milked---, the cows will do ----- each per year".
混這麼多種時態在理面, 由其是provide, milked => 在語意上有幫助嘛?

(a)providing them with high-energy feed, and milking
CD 上是有人講這是兩個伴隨的動作?
有這種連接兩個伴隨動作的句子嘛 ?

A)如果要對的話，主詞為farmers，providing跟milking都應該是伴隨take這個動詞，只是and前面多了一個逗號
(OG裡面好像有兩題，v1, v2ing...+v3ing的類題)
不過這樣的用法文法對了可是句意上providing跟milking伴隨take這個動作卻不大合邏輯，
另外per year用are producing 也不大恰當

E)的狀況則不同於A，此時受詞都是them(Holstein cows)，
應該是cool, provided..., and milked 的平衡對稱

[shopcat]

那D為何不對? 請指教

[shopcat]

我知道了 D錯是因為前面有them
所以要用複數的cows
不好意思 沒看清楚 ~.~"

[l18david]

我記得有誰講過，好像是莫伯伯，沒有milk them的用法...

[ivanchiang]

莫伯講得是常人用的英文
這是ＧＭＡＴ．是殺人的英文

問一下
關於此題中Ａ．Ｃ選項裡的are producing
這用法沒問題嗎？？
我總覺得不大對．．．ＣＤ上沒什麼人提到這點
我覺得are producing 看起來有持續進行的味道在．感覺很怪異
我是選Ｅ．請大家指教

[CUGGYER]

這題我還是支持A
在事實中 不需要用will未來式 E第一個不妥的地方
A可以解釋成持續進行 因此用進行是還說的過去
第二 如果用
(while Holstein cows are) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce Attention) 來解釋
E 的逗點就變的很怪異 因為它連接兩個動詞 不需要AND錢還加逗點阿

A因為是連接3個動詞 因此逗點是必要的

基於以上兩個理由 我選擇A

(BD因為代名詞數量一致 已被刪除 C的and不對稱又有逗點 刪)

[林小馬]

這題我還是支持A
在事實中 不需要用will未來式 E第一個不妥的地方
A可以解釋成持續進行 因此用進行是還說的過去
第二 如果用
(while Holstein cows are) provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce Attention) 來解釋
E 的逗點就變的很怪異 因為它連接兩個動詞 不需要AND錢還加逗點阿

A因為是連接3個動詞 因此逗點是必要的

基於以上兩個理由 我選擇A

(BD因為代名詞數量一致 已被刪除 C的and不對稱又有逗點 刪)

跟你一樣
我也想問E選項的逗點(,and milked)耶
我覺得沒有這個逗點會更好耶
有人可以解釋E為什麼要有那個逗點嗎

不過我個人是比較支持E不支持A啦
因為您說A是三項所以逗號合理
可是A的三項並不平衡啊 V, Ving, and Ving
如果是後面兩項用ing當分辭構句 那兩項的平衡同樣也不該放逗號呢

[maronchen1103]

For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of
milk each per year.

A. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
E. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

這題我原本選E, 現在支持A
題出一點點看法, 請大家參考一下

看A之前,先看一下分詞片語帖http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=2269&highlight=%A4%C0%B5%FC%A4%F9%BBy
She is sitting on the tree and reading a book. (一般語法)
She is sitting on the tree, reading a book.(GMAT語法)
表示主詞同時做的動作

這題的A
For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, provides them with high-energy feed, and milks them regularly,...(一般用法)
將後面provide, milk改為Ving就是答案了...表示farmer同時做takes care, provides..., milks三動作

我查了一下字典, 真的有milk(擠乳) cows(them)這種用法

另外, 用Ving跟後面的are producing時態也比較配合

至於E
1. 逗號應該取消
2. 主被動移轉
3. 如果是while the Holstein cows省略, 時態也不合
4. 用未來式will很怪(以前都沒這樣做)

open to discuss

[stilalala]

Q12:
For the farmer who takes care to keep them cool, providing them with high-energy feed,
and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year.

A. providing them with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
B. providing them with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
C. provided with high-energy feed, and milking them regularly, Holstein cows are producing
D. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, the Holstein cow produces
E. provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce

ans:(e)

(e) For the farmer who takes ---, provided with-- and milked---, the cows will do ----- each per year".
混這麼多種時態在理面, 由其是provide, milked => 在語意上有幫助嘛?

(a)providing them with high-energy feed, and milking
CD 上是有人講這是兩個伴隨的動作?
有這種連接兩個伴隨動作的句子嘛 ?

A)如果要對的話，主詞為farmers，providing跟milking都應該是伴隨take這個動詞，只是and前面多了一個逗號
(OG裡面好像有兩題，v1, v2ing...+v3ing的類題)
不過這樣的用法文法對了可是句意上providing跟milking伴隨take這個動作卻不大合邏輯，
另外per year用are producing 也不大恰當

E)的狀況則不同於A，此時受詞都是them(Holstein cows)，
應該是cool, provided..., and milked 的平衡對稱

覺得這個解釋還蠻合理的
無論a或e,都有一個問題,就是and前面還有一個","
應該是有三個並列,才會在最後面的and前面加上,吧

所以我覺得Cool ,provided , miked 並列好像蠻合理的耶

請大家指教

[coulomb]

這題我選E
我覺得For farmers who....是因為由輕到重所以拉到前面來
原句應該是Provided with high-energy feed, and milked regularly, Holstein cows will produce an average of 2,275 gallons of milk each per year for the farmer who takes care to keep them cool.
所以這一句的主詞是cows
如果這樣看的話, 同一句話裡面的代名詞只能代一樣的東西, 由於for farmer子句中的them指cows
所以A中的them就是指cows ,而providing是 cows provid改成主動的分詞片語變成的
所以A會變成 cows providing them(cows) with high-energy feed ,and milking them(cows)....
造成句意不合理 牛自己提供自己食物 牛自己擠自己的牛奶 （夭壽喔～～）
不過E的and前面為什麼要打逗點還是很奇怪
請大家指教～