[問題]天山3-Q38

[twkevin]

天山03-38:
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide
B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding
D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide

答案是﹙D﹚

我想問的是 ,using ..., 那個插入語
我看CD有人是說修飾decide
有插入語修飾動辭嘛 ? 我是猶豫了A, D選了D 不過覺的很怪

[Calvin]

A is wrong since it puts a comma proceding " and ". If " and " connects the two actions referring the same subject, it cannot use comma.

With respect to participal " using ", it indeed modifies the verbal " decide ". It means 伴隨. There are a lot of similar examples in OG.

FYI

[agk99]

to twkevin
using...當然可以做修飾語，但事實上，插入語根本不必管他
不過更快的做法是，這一句是examine 與 decide的平衡
這就只能選D的啦

[twkevin]

天山03-38:
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide
B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding
D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide

答案是﹙D﹚

我想問的是 ,using ..., 那個插入語
我看CD有人是說修飾decide
有插入語修飾動辭嘛 ? 我是猶豫了A, D選了D 不過覺的很怪

我想問的是插入語修飾名詞是很平常的
但插入語修飾動詞我到是沒見過


還是這句插入語executives + , using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses,
如果是這樣 那是說插入語可以不緊接在修飾的名詞後面嘛 ?

才疏學淺,有煩請指點

[davidlee0222]

天山03-38:
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

就像Calvin大牛說的
鬥號在and前沒有三個東西無法平衡
而因為對等連接詞and無法表達因果
所以這裡用分辭次要結構補述來補上因果關係
像AGK大大說的兩鬥號分辭補述當沒看到
因為那是次要結構

原句主軸是要講
N model指出經理人(用分析中的客觀標準)檢視內外在環境並決定策略


這裡光用主辭重複的結構錯誤就可以刪掉幾個

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide

and前鬥號無法平衡
後can decide無連接詞變流水句
且改變原句主軸

B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding

and錯誤重複
主辭重複使結構謬誤
後面原本是主軸的decide變成補述
改變原句主軸

C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding

decide原本要跟examine平衡
為兩同等重要的動作
卻變成分辭補述的次要結構
拿掉不影響主軸
使主軸意義改變
用in帶出的補述awkward
應該是要用by
但用分辭using就可以直接表達"藉由"

D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide

兩鬥號分辭當沒看到
examine跟decide平衡
分辭補述因果連貫關係

E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide

they主辭重複結構錯誤
兩鬥號中用in帶出的補述awkward

答案是﹙D﹚

我想問的是 ,using ..., 那個插入語
我看CD有人是說修飾decide
有插入語修飾動辭嘛 ? 我是猶豫了A, D選了D 不過覺的很怪

and在鬥號前
後面分辭補數就在補述第二個洞辭

and在鬥號後
分辭補述就是在修飾第一個洞辭
可以看句意合不合

[twkevin]

天山03-38:
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a
firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective
criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A. conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide
B. conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding
C. conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, deciding
D. conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide
E. conditions and, in their use of the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, they decide

答案是﹙D﹚

我想問的是 ,using ..., 那個插入語
我看CD有人是說修飾decide
有插入語修飾動辭嘛 ? 我是猶豫了A, D選了D 不過覺的很怪

我想問的是插入語修飾名詞是很平常的
但插入語修飾動詞我到是沒見過


還是這句插入語executives + , using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses,
如果是這樣 那是說插入語可以不緊接在修飾的名詞後面嘛 ?

才疏學淺,有煩請指點

原句主軸是要講
N model指出經理人(用分析中的客觀標準)檢視內外在環境並決定策略
所以是這句插入語修飾executives?

? 如果是這樣 那是說插入語可以不緊接在修飾的名詞後面嘛 ?

[Behemoth]

using....為插入語修飾executives
and兩邊主詞相同省略

[reohuang]

With respect to participal " using ", it indeed modifies the verbal " decide ". It means 伴隨. There are a lot of similar examples in OG.

FYI

我也以為using是用來modify the verb "decide"比較合邏輯喔~

[Behemoth]

如果using用來修飾decide
會有因果倒置的問題

分詞表伴隨是用來表示原型動詞此一動作引起分詞此一伴隨動作
如此一來
此句就變成decide後才有using的概念
前後因果相反

我上面所謂省略相同主詞executives是省略在decide前面
所以using仍是修飾executives沒問題