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帖子vincemeagei » 2004-09-20 21:58

求助GWD6-22
Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he
C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh
D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh
E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh


答案是"E"怎麼會用Very擺字首ㄋ?
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帖子micht » 2004-09-28 16:45

我對這題的看法....

Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh.

主詞補語放前面 倒裝 very reluctant to have.....(adj phrase) modifies the Subject "Charles Lindbergh"



這一題可以參考 OG #86

His right hand and arm crippled by a sniper's bullet during the First World War, Horace Pippin,.......

OG's explaination: His right hand...... clearly and grammatically modifies the subject of the sentence "Horace Pippin"


這樣正確嗎?
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帖子Grace » 2004-09-28 23:43

You are right.. micht28..
Well done~ :P
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帖子8妹 » 2004-11-15 13:26

請問a哪裡錯了?
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帖子 » 2004-11-15 15:37

trish8m \$m[1]:請問a哪裡錯了?


for A. Charles Lindbergh was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore .....

兩個句子之間要有連接詞啊 ^^ (d3) <--這個很妙
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帖子bugubugu » 2004-11-15 22:56

(E)是SC(主詞補語)放句首的倒裝
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帖子Grace » 2004-11-17 09:24

答案A 形成了兩個 sentence fragments, --須要一個連接詞把兩句的意思 connect 起來.,
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帖子guhuo » 2005-02-27 23:47

可否請問一下,此句該如何還原?

想了粉久,還是不行…
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帖子agk99 » 2005-02-28 00:00

(Because he was)Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh .....

其實這和micht同學講的一樣,副詞片語放句首,既是省略,又是考你主詞的應用能力
如果你是美加同學,請參考學期一開始就發的紅色講義第十頁左右吧,省略副詞片語放句首的修飾原則
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帖子guhuo » 2005-02-28 00:23

(Because he was)Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh .....

其實這和micht同學講的一樣,副詞片語放句首,既是省略,又是考你主詞的應用能力
如果你是美加同學,請參考學期一開始就發的紅色講義第十頁左右吧,省略副詞片語放句首的修飾原則


可是這樣省略的話,不是Being要保留嗎?
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帖子Behemoth » 2005-02-28 00:26

being也可省略
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帖子guhuo » 2005-02-28 00:42

sorry, 再問一個問題…

Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh .....

如果省略了Being,那very reluctant to have ... when...

紅色的子句不就沒有動詞了嗎?

還有…如果是(Because he was)very reluctant to have ... when he attempted his solo...., Charles Linbergh refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so. 的話,不就是有兩個副詞子句嗎?(藍色的部份)

實在想不通,謝謝各位大大的幫忙…^^
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帖子agk99 » 2005-02-28 00:47

When I was at age of 5, I dated with a girl in my class.
這句可以改寫為
At age of five, I dated with a firl in my class.時間副詞片語一樣可以和主要子句合併在一起的

至於第二個問題,就是因為句子結構太複雜,但又符合省略原則,所以可以的
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帖子guhuo » 2005-02-28 00:52

When I was at age of 5, I dated with a girl in my class.
這句可以改寫為
At age of five, I dated with a firl in my class.時間副詞片語一樣可以和主要子句合併在一起的
===>Thanks a lot...^^
至於第二個問題,就是因為句子結構太複雜,但又符合省略原則,所以可以的


謝謝AGK99大大 :laugh & Behemoth大大...^^
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帖子davidlee0222 » 2005-02-28 01:05

vincemeagei \$m[1]:求助GWD6-22
Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he
C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh
D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh
E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh


答案是"E"怎麼會用Very擺字首ㄋ?
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本來要睡了
看到一提可以速解的
來玩玩

回應trish
A的therefore是副詞不是連接詞
因此流水句

這提用刪去法不用20秒
A已經錯了
且了解句意是要講這個人基於不願意超重
而做了某舉動

B的when開頭條件子具有一點改句意不過還好
但中間差了個being子句就結構錯誤
直接刪
C看到Since後居然有個so
也錯
D不管being到底要不要省
脫節居然沒鬥號
必錯 刪

E脫節的引導句
應該就是being省略
所以對的一踏糊塗
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