GWD8-2

[agk99]

Q2:
Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted
B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
C. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted
D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both




答案給D，可我選B，真的不好分耶

[illuna]

呵呵我第一次也選B....不過agk大哥如果從both.....and....平衡來看就可以得到答案了....

因為後面and連接兩個人名.....所以在rooted附近有用both的答案都不對....

只剩下CD可以選....C中的主要子句沒有動詞....所以選D

[agk99]

both ...and 不是慣用搭配嗎
我想是不是"both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington"中的of 出了問題??

[illuna]

both ...and 不是慣用搭配嗎
我想是不是"both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington"中的of 出了問題??

both....and是慣用法沒錯....

我的意思是說這句「both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington」是不是應該改成「rooted in the stride-piano tradition of both Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington」

因為當both放在rooted的前面...後面再接and的時候平衡也應該要接一個動詞吧?可是放的位置在於of的後面and......讓rooted這邊的both孤零零....

還有一件事我剛剛想到....... 要用到both修飾是不是應該至少要兩個東西或兩個人以上才能用呢?

例如這題both所修飾的a body of work是單數感覺上怪怪的....應該要兩個東西才會講both怎樣怎樣的吧?

agk大哥了解我的意思嗎?

[agk99]

了
這題真的很陰
這也說明了ETS有適度調整他的出題原則

[魚]

了
這題真的很陰
這也說明了ETS有適度調整他的出題原則

插花

1. 橘子哥說的沒錯
2.有適度調整他的出題原則 <---沒改 就是硬梆梆比較咩

(網咖滑鼠真不好操作)

[tobosu]

D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

請教依下...在 "Jazz pianist and composer " 前加個 "A"...
" A Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted"
會部會比較好....卸卸..

[Behemoth]

講職業職稱時可以不加冠詞~

[agk99]

好問題，可我覺得不用
理由是我這裡覺得名詞做形容詞使用

當然我也沒把握，可以請同學補充

[himorgan]

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

不好意思
因為隔天上課要睡了
我只針對(B)(E)講
呼應上面另一個大大的話
只要是both在最後就不平衡
rooted both in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington
這樣就不平衡啊

[cocaine]

in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington
這是個介詞片語..
所以both在文句中感覺是多出來..
也能用both..and 平衡去解

[simommmm]

Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.

B. Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

E. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

不好意思
因為隔天上課要睡了
我只針對(B)(E)講
呼應上面另一個大大的話
只要是both在最後就不平衡
rooted both in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington
這樣就不平衡啊

GWD3-41:

In ancient Thailand, much of the local artisans’ creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them.

A. much of the local artisans’ creative energy was expended for the creation of Buddha images and when they constructed and decorated the temples that enshrined them
B. much of the local artisans’ creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images and on construction and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined
C. much of the local artisans’ creative energy was expended on the creation of Buddha images as well as constructing and decoration of the temples in which they were enshrined
D. creating images of Buddha accounted for much of the local artisans’ creative energy, and also constructing and decorating the temples enshrining them
E. the creating of Buddha images accounted for much of the local artisans’ creative energy as well as construction and decoration of the temples that enshrined them


KEY:B

我當時在這題的討論中問了有關介係詞省略的問題
當時Cavin大大回答是"省略無疑義時便可以省略"
現在這一題又讓我覺得我的觀念並沒有釐清
我選了A選項 因為我把and Duke...看成是and in the stride-piano tradition of Duke...的省略
所以現在想再進一步請問 何謂省略無疑義的介係詞正當省略呢???

[agk99]

我後來選D就是覺得D最簡捷也不會有修飾歧異的問題，這句既然用both有問題，而不用也沒事，那就不要用好了

不選A是因為太過累贅了A. Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

紅字部分不該使用，所以後半段也就不看了

至於你說何時可省，我覺得還是看整句結構以及句意而定，很難一概而論

[hungji]

1.快速觀察5答案
2.差異(1)Thelonious Monk,...,與Jazz pianist and coposer Thelonious Monk (2)both
3.回題目抓主詞動詞, 刪 C
4.看句意 both 很奇怪,啥句子阿 刪 A,B,E
5.只剩 D 強迫中獎, D 代入原句, 再唸一次, 讚
6.選 D, D 對了, 繼續做下一題

[puthing]

in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington
這是個介詞片語..
所以both在文句中感覺是多出來..
也能用both..and 平衡去解

請問您的意思是說

the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington

根本是一件事(一個傳統)

所以用both沒必要

這樣對嗎?