[討論]請各位朋友評評解GWD-13-1的作法~(前一篇忘記畫底線...被罵了)

[ivanchiang]

Although she had been known as an effective legislator first in the Texas Senate and later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard Nixon in 1974 was she made a nationally recognized figure, as it was televised nationwide.

A. later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara
Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of
President Richard Nixon in 1974 was she made a nationally recognized
figure, as it was
B. later in the United States House of Representatives, Barbara Jordan did
not become a nationally recognized figure until 1974, when she
participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard
Nixon, which were
C. later in the Untied States House of Representatives, it was not until
1974 that Barbara Jordan became a nationally recognized figure, with
her participation in the hearings on the impeachment of President
Richard Nixon, which was
D. then also later in the United States House of Representatives, not until
1974 did Barbara Jordan become a nationally recognized figure, as she
participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President Richard
Nixon, being
E. then also later in the United States House of Representatives, Barbara
Jordan did not become a nationally recognized figure until 1974, when
she participated in the hearings on the impeachment of President
Richard Nixon, which was

請問我以下的過程是否有問題

1.首先我看到開頭的Although she，我就開始去找第二句的
主語，於是很快刪掉了A(Barbara Jordan’s participation )、C(it)、D(not
until 1974 did Barbara Jordan)
2.剩下B跟E，BE最大的差異在尾端的which was、which were，一時之間我看不大出句意，但我隱約覺得which指的是hearings，而且E中開頭的then also later直覺上有點彆扭

請各位給我指教....謝謝

[Pufa]

A. later in the United States House of Representatives, not until Barbara
Jordan’s participation in the hearings on the impeachment of
President Richard Nixon in 1974 was she made a nationally recognized
figure, as it was

請問我以下的過程是否有問題

1.首先我看到開頭的Although she，我就開始去找第二句的
主語，於是很快刪掉了A(Barbara Jordan’s participation )、C(it)、D(not
until 1974 did Barbara Jordan)

有問題。
第一：
這題的A還是Although she..., she...
第二：
Athough 主詞一..., 主詞二....是可以的。

大全的例子
80. Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.
google的例子
Althought these contributions are volunary, without them the school would not be able to fund such visits.

[agk99]

這樣做不行喔，你應該要刪掉D和E
至少先求平衡first in and later in....
ABC會比較好確認，用主動詞一致來挑
which判斷 一下 挑B

[davidlee0222]

first and later慣用刪DE
although she...
鬥號後依定要立刻出現主詞BJ
C刪

AB要看句意
被播出的是聽證會複數
it是單數錯

這裡看到鬥號which非限定觀代
可以帶鬥號前更前面的東西
超經典!!!!

[davidlee0222]

first and later慣用刪DE
although she...
鬥號後依定要立刻出現主詞BJ
C刪

AB要看句意
被播出的是聽證會複數
it是單數錯

這裡看到鬥號which非限定觀代
可以帶鬥號前更前面的東西
超經典!!!!

[davidlee0222]

first and later慣用刪DE
although she...
鬥號後依定要立刻出現主詞BJ
C刪

AB要看句意
被播出的是聽證會複數
it是單數錯

這裡看到鬥號which非限定觀代
可以帶鬥號前更前面的東西
超經典!!!!

[ck1109]

first and later慣用刪DE
although she...
鬥號後依定要立刻出現主詞BJ
C刪

AB要看句意
被播出的是聽證會複數
it是單數錯

這裡看到鬥號which非限定觀代
可以帶鬥號前更前面的東西
超經典!!!!

那請問一下
that呢
that限定用法也可以代更前面的東西嗎??