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Q2:
Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

A. Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore
(run-on)

B. When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being veryreluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he

C. Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh (so->redundancy)

D. Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh (S錯誤 )

E. Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

ans E

想請問B錯在那裡?

[best555tw]

(1)看到being大概就可劃掉了，除非是看到after後面沒有動詞須把be改成being
(2)reluctant修飾的對象不清楚
(3)如果改成用and連接不用being也不夠簡潔

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