真題一道

[汪汪北鼻]

1.For many revisionist historians, Christopher Columbus has come to personify devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that has decimated native peoples of the Western Hemisphere.

A. devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that has decimated native peoples of the Western Hemisphere
B. devastation and enslavement in the name of progress by which native peoples of the Western Hemisphere decimated
C. devastating and enslaving in the name of progress those native peoples of the Western Hemisphere which in the name of progress are decimated.
D. devastating and enslaving those native peoples of the western Hemisphere which in the name of progress are decimated.
E. the devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that have decimated the native peoples of the Western Hemisphere

我選A，請教各位的意見

[訪客]

I choose between A and B

Finally I choose A.

discuss more....

[mirandamao]

本選A

但後來仔細研究根據句意想選B耶(好饒舌)

應該是過程中native people被殺戮,不是native people被過程中殺戮

CDE首刪 because of "are, have"

請賜教

[lightblue]

我選b 因為ving 不合所以去cd
冠詞the所以去e

a 不選是因為我覺得在此 name
用by which的子句修飾會比a好
另外 我覺得用完成式怪怪的

請討論

[GoldDigger]

看完各解釋.....
我選B


重點是看decimate到底是誰做的動作.

[gogotu]

a 不選是因為我覺得在此 name
用by which的子句修飾會比a好
另外 我覺得用完成式怪怪的

請討論

第一，by which在這裡是否應該是修飾progress？
第二，看到by是否應想到被動？但是，但B的選項中，並沒有被動。
第三，原句說：這個進程(progress)消滅大多數西半球的原住民族，但是在B，是說：西半球的原住民族毀了…(毀了什麼？看不出來)

看來看去， a比較好。請繼續討論！

[mirandamao]

我做到這題真題了 答案是A....

I still can not be conceived of the answer.

[汪汪北鼻]

你是上機考時遇到的嗎？　

[Calvin]

I go for A

the meaning of the sentence should be that some kind of progress does s'th rather than native people do s'th "by some kind of progress ".

B is awkward.

FYI

[zuckzhc]

我推 A

A is more clear than the other choices. It also properly uses "devastation and enslavement" rather than "devastating and enslaving" to represent a concept rather than an action.

In B, there is a grammartical mistake in the relative sentence. The object of decimate should be "native peoples of the Western Hemisphere". The verb here should adapt passive tense, if you want to choose B.

[best555tw]

我覺得E
that have 修飾 the devastation and enslavement

我來亂的^^
可能我誤解意思了

[維尼]

1.For many revisionist historians, Christopher Columbus has come to personify devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that has decimated native peoples of the Western Hemisphere.

A. devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that has decimated native peoples of the Western Hemisphere
B. devastation and enslavement in the name of progress by which native peoples of the Western Hemisphere decimated
C. devastating and enslaving in the name of progress those native peoples of the Western Hemisphere which in the name of progress are decimated.
D. devastating and enslaving those native peoples of the western Hemisphere which in the name of progress are decimated.
E. the devastation and enslavement in the name of progress that have decimated the native peoples of the Western Hemisphere

我選A，請教各位的意見

乍看之下
好多關鍵單字都看不懂
硬著頭皮做看看
我選A :P

答案 B 的 decimate 是用主動 可是又出現 by 感覺怪怪的
答案 D 中 the name of progress 的位置會造成 dangling modifier
答案 C 怪怪的 應該有抄錯 :P
答案 E 主動詞不一致

不過
A 裡面的 that 要指誰呢? progress?
用現在完成式? 動作持續到現在?
感覺怪怪的
如果把答案 C 裡 which 子句中的 in the name of progress 拿掉
(如果是把前面的拿掉就跟 D 一樣了)
變成是用 動名詞 的形式
這樣子符合 personify 的用法嗎? 可以用 動作 來表示一種 象徵?
會比 A 好嗎?
請大家指教一下

[mirandamao]

汪汪北鼻

我也是做真題遇到的,但真題的答案有時也不準

不過看完各位的description, I can agree with answer A.

一開始我認為process不會殺native people,應該是native people 在這process被殺,so I chose B for my answer.

However, the meaning of this question should "哥倫布把屠殺及奴化西半球的原住民擬人化為一個過程"

For B's meaning "哥倫布把西半球原住民被殺戮的屠殺,奴化過程給擬人化"就好像有點怪怪了

翻譯如有問題請指正

[freshmanduke]

我選E
我覺得decimated native people修飾的是devastation and enslavement
A的話 has應該是modify progress 好像改變句意

[Calvin]

in E

progress ---> have ??

E violates the basic principle of " S-V parallelism ". I won't choose E.

FYI and open to discuss