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帖子汪汪北鼻 » 2005-06-07 16:58

Scientists have recently discovered that the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly’s wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling the insect to control how much heat energy is absorbed by its wings and how much is reflected away.

A.wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling (主詞是construction ,所以動詞are 有誤)


B: wings, which is the same one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, that also enables (which指涉不清)

C: wings is the same as the one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling (the same as ,enabling )


D: wings—the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enables (看起來似乎沒有錯,用破折號解釋前面那現象,後面的動詞也沒錯,就是多了個also)

E: wings—of the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enable (主詞是單數,動詞也應是單數)

我選C,請教各位意見
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帖子best555tw » 2005-06-07 17:09

我覺得D
ultrathin是什麼東西???
結構來講我選D
Make a decision and move on.
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帖子維尼 » 2005-06-07 18:21

汪汪北鼻 \$m[1]:Scientists have recently discovered that the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly’s wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling the insect to control how much heat energy is absorbed by its wings and how much is reflected away.

A.wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling (主詞是construction ,所以動詞are 有誤)


B: wings, which is the same one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, that also enables (which指涉不清)

C: wings is the same as the one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling (the same as ,enabling )


D: wings—the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enables (看起來似乎沒有錯,用破折號解釋前面那現象,後面的動詞也沒錯,就是多了個also)

E: wings—of the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enable (主詞是單數,動詞也應是單數)

我選C,請教各位意見


D再加一票 :P

C的結構有點詭異
同位語 跟 主要子句 的關係被弄亂了
句意也變了


D 的 also 我覺得很ok呀
因為破折號裡講的是 蝴蝶
後面要講其他昆蟲
只是同位語的另一個逗號沒打出來 (不知道是因為有破折號的關係 ;-S )
不知道會不會有問題 @_@
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帖子lightblue » 2005-06-08 00:25

D和E的話 破折號不會修到wing嗎?
個人的看法 請大家不吝指教 :P
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帖子gogotu » 2005-06-08 09:27

我選D
這句原來的意思是ultrathin .... is enabling,而c的意思好像變成是butterflies 在enabling....
更重要的是C把句子的重心,從ultrathin...is enabling改成ultrathin is the same as...
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帖子richpooh » 2005-06-08 12:24

汪汪北鼻 \$m[1]:Scientists have recently discovered that the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly’s wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling the insect to control how much heat energy is absorbed by its wings and how much is reflected away.

A.wings, the same as the one making some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, are enabling (主詞是construction ,所以動詞are 有誤)

我覺得主詞是 the ultrathin ,所以動詞 are enabling 有誤。

B: wings, which is the same one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, that also enables (which指涉不清)

嗯,我同意,而且discovered that the ultrathin......後面沒有動詞,還有 the phenomenon of iridescence, that also enables....不論 that 是指 the phenomenon 還是 iridescence,句意都錯。

C: wings is the same as the one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling (the same as ,enabling )

discovered that the ultrathin......後面沒有動詞,有誤。而且 the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling....錯的情形和 B 一樣。

D: wings—the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enables (看起來似乎沒有錯,用破折號解釋前面那現象,後面的動詞也沒錯,就是多了個also)

我的想法也和維尼一樣耶!!可是5個答案中,這個看起來是最適合的答案,所以我選D。

E: wings—of the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enable (主詞是單數,動詞也應是單數)

我覺得主詞是 the ultrathin ,所以動詞 enable 少加 s 。


我選C,請教各位意見


請問汪汪北鼻,這題答案是那一個呢?
我選D ,個人淺見,請指正~ i73
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帖子christina » 2005-06-08 12:41

我選C,
construction of a butterfly’s wings相似於某一種東西,而可以讓昆蟲去控制...
所以用分詞enabling來表達隨後的結果
答案D裡.
the same construction "that" ,the same...that 不是就指同一個construction的嗎?這裡好像沒有,
而且also enables,用also,感覺前面應該有另一個動作吧..
沒有智慧的頭腦,像是個沒有蠟燭的燈籠。
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帖子汪汪北鼻 » 2005-06-08 14:53

請問汪汪北鼻,這題答案是那一個呢?
我選D ,個人淺見,請指正~

:smile 本題是jj,沒有答案的,提供大家思考 :smile
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帖子維尼 » 2005-06-08 17:36

汪汪北鼻 \$m[1]:請問汪汪北鼻,這題答案是那一個呢?
我選D ,個人淺見,請指正~

:smile 本題是jj,沒有答案的,提供大家思考 :smile


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帖子nicoleliu » 2005-06-08 21:16

C: wings is the same as the one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling (the same as ,enabling )


D: wings—the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enables (看起來似乎沒有錯,用破折號解釋前面那現象,後面的動詞也沒錯,就是多了個also)

我覺得是D
不可能是C吧...就像樓上幾位說的一樣,沒動詞阿!!!
D是相較之下比較好的答案~~不過也是有點問題...
也可能題目是有錯阿~畢竟這題是JJ...

不過還是期待維尼同學問完老師的答案囉~~~ 8-|
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帖子zuckzhc » 2005-06-08 21:59

我投D一票
看法如下
"Scientists have recently discovered that..." 由that 引導的名詞子句要有完整的主詞與動詞的結構, 主詞部分為construction 所以動詞需為單數型態的enables , ACE可以直接劃掉, B我認為問題出現在the same one, one 指的是contruction 還是 butterfly? 不夠清楚

我想提一個跟選項沒關係的問題 ;-$
句中的 the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly's wing
為何在ultrathin 與layered的中間不是用 and 連接兩個形容詞,而是用逗號分開呢 ? 我在有些書上也看過這樣的用法, 感覺上好像太簡單都沒看到人討論 ,不知道哪位好心的高手可以指導一下
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帖子zuckzhc » 2005-06-08 22:07

christina \$m[1]:我選C,
construction of a butterfly’s wings相似於某一種東西,而可以讓昆蟲去控制...
所以用分詞enabling來表達隨後的結果
答案D裡.
the same construction "that" ,the same...that 不是就指同一個construction的嗎?這裡好像沒有,
而且also enables,用also,感覺前面應該有另一個動作吧..


我剛剛也想了一下關於 the same that 在這裡的用法
這裡他重新把construction再拿出來講一遍, 目的就是為了和前面the construction of the butterfly's wings區隔, 避免混淆,這和後面的句意和起來看也是通的
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帖子reohuang » 2005-06-09 02:53

zuckzhc \$m[1]:我投D一票
看法如下
"Scientists have recently discovered that..." 由that 引導的名詞子句要有完整的主詞與動詞的結構, 主詞部分為construction 所以動詞需為單數型態的enables , ACE可以直接劃掉, B我認為問題出現在the same one, one 指的是contruction 還是 butterfly? 不夠清楚

我想提一個跟選項沒關係的問題 ;-$
句中的 the ultrathin, layered construction of a butterfly's wing
為何在ultrathin 與layered的中間不是用 and 連接兩個形容詞,而是用逗號分開呢 ? 我在有些書上也看過這樣的用法, 感覺上好像太簡單都沒看到人討論 ,不知道哪位好心的高手可以指導一下


我沒抄錯的話莫背背曾經這樣說明上面的問題:
a adj1 and adj2 noun...這樣的表示方式adj2在形容描述裡是佔比較高的比重(adj1:adj2=40:60)
a adj1, adj2 noun...這樣則是50:50
兩種方法都可以...強調的程度不同...

有關於本題我個人prefer d...原因如下:
我個人以為主詞為construction (of a butterfly's wing)
untrathin(maybe是"極""thin"的意思...字典沒這個字)與layered應該都是adj...如上所述的形容詞表達方式...
所以a)的are就不大對了...另外the same as前面到底是省略which are還是which is也有可能造成ambiguous (a of b + verb的類型...verb是跟a還是跟b)
b)有了that造成句子沒有verb...另外that關代應該也不能在,後面(插入句不知道可不可以喔) *-)
c)c我以為是enable出了問題...因為是那個東西enable後面的描述...這樣的表達方式有可能是construction、iridescence或是前面的整句話...會有ambiguous的可能
d)破折號...有重複說明the same construction 應不至誤解為描述wings...另外因為補充說明裡有提到construction "makes"...所以主要句子中的also enables的also我個人也認為是okay的(因為construction有兩個動作...一個在補充說明一個在主要子句)
e)主詞動詞不一致...另外破折號內說明的主題也不清楚

open to discuss...
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帖子mirandamao » 2005-06-09 12:37

這題正確答案是D ;HH
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帖子維尼 » 2005-06-09 23:38

nicoleliu \$m[1]:C: wings is the same as the one that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence, enabling (the same as ,enabling )


D: wings—the same construction that makes some butterflies shimmer via the phenomenon of iridescence—also enables (看起來似乎沒有錯,用破折號解釋前面那現象,後面的動詞也沒錯,就是多了個also)

我覺得是D
不可能是C吧...就像樓上幾位說的一樣,沒動詞阿!!!
D是相較之下比較好的答案~~不過也是有點問題...
也可能題目是有錯阿~畢竟這題是JJ...

不過還是期待維尼同學問完老師的答案囉~~~ 8-|


老師的解釋如下:
他選答案 D
我問答案 C 哪裡不好
老師認為 C 的講法把重心移轉了
變成主要是在講 the same
enable 變成附帶的

可是
我覺得這邊的 the same as 和 the same that 似乎需要推敲一下
*謎之音: 變成考生物常識了啦 ;''( *
因為結構上答案 D 跟原題最接近
可是變成 the same that 跟原題句意又不一樣了 @_@
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