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帖子asicschu » 2004-11-13 09:35

One pervasive theory explains the introduction of breakfast cereals in the early 1900s as a result of the growing number of automobiles, which led to a decline in horse ownership and a subsequent grain glut; by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored.
(A) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored
(B) persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(C) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, it restored market equilibrium
(D) the persuasion of people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(E) market equilibrium was restored when people were persuaded to eat former horse feed

Ans: B
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asicschu \$m[1]:One pervasive theory explains the introduction of breakfast cereals in the early 1900s as a result of the growing number of automobiles, which led to a decline in horse ownership and a subsequent grain glut; by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored.

(A) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored
(B) persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(C) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, it restored market equilibrium
(D) the persuasion of people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(E) market equilibrium was restored when people were persuaded to eat former horse feed

Ans: B
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魚 \$m[1]:
asicschu \$m[1]:One pervasive theory explains the introduction of breakfast cereals in the early 1900s as a result of the growing number of automobiles, which led to a decline in horse ownership and a subsequent grain glut; by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored.

(A) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored
(B) persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(C) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, it restored market equilibrium
(D) the persuasion of people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(E) market equilibrium was restored when people were persuaded to eat former horse feed

Ans: B


啪謝豬茱弟 , 偶幫你補了下面的畫線
這道題我也錯,我選的答案是E :^)

B / E 最大的不同是時態 因為是用 "分號" , 的確B的時態也與前面的One pervasive theory explains the introduction ~有前後呼應的作用

但是 這樣的句意我絕得怪異,不若E佳 , 期待高人來回答吧 (BB)
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帖子agnes » 2004-11-13 10:05

選(B)的話
分號後面的動詞是啥?? !@@
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帖子asicschu » 2004-11-13 10:25

魚 \$m[1]:
魚 \$m[1]:
asicschu \$m[1]:One pervasive theory explains the introduction of breakfast cereals in the early 1900s as a result of the growing number of automobiles, which led to a decline in horse ownership and a subsequent grain glut; by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored.

(A) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, market equilibrium was restored
(B) persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(C) by persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed, it restored market equilibrium
(D) the persuasion of people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium
(E) market equilibrium was restored when people were persuaded to eat former horse feed

Ans: B


啪謝豬茱弟 , 偶幫你補了下面的畫線
這道題我也錯,我選的答案是E :^)

B / E 最大的不同是時態 因為是用 "分號" , 的確B的時態也與前面的One pervasive theory explains the introduction ~有前後呼應的作用

但是 這樣的句意我絕得怪異,不若E佳 , 期待高人來回答吧 (BB)


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帖子agk99 » 2004-11-13 12:49

討論過後請加註題號,以方便其他朋友檢索
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帖子agk99 » 2004-11-15 00:12

標題我改了,和asicchu說一聲
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帖子Winni » 2005-06-27 13:21

這題我也是選E

不過E選項的persuade由主動變為被動, 主語也從原句的persuading變為market

equilibrium...再者, 亦將原句had previously been改為former...有改變句意之嫌

B選項動詞是restored, 整句看來似乎比E來的精確

不知道這樣解釋答案B通不通
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帖子sklpeng » 2005-06-27 17:12

同意樓上
分號之前的句子只導引
句意尚未完整
所以會有分號後面的補充說明

E中的主語突然變成market equilibrium
很突兀
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帖子gogotu » 2005-06-27 17:53

這題兄弟的看法是這樣的:
第一,看到分號,答案肯定要有個完整句子。
第二,一個一個看:A的by persuading..., market不好,因為,market不會是persuading的動作者;同樣,c去掉,因為it,指代不清。
第二,D不好,這裡用名詞比較不precise。
第三,B E那個好?先看E:market equilibrium was restored when people were persuaded to eat former horse feed:最大的問題在用when不precise甚至有點曲解原意,因為原意是說,透過persuading...的動作,使市場達到平衡(有表達因果的意味),所以,如果一定要像E這樣講,就要說:market equilibrium was restored bypersuading people to.....而且,eat "former horse feed"也用得不好。
再看B,persuading people to eat what had previously been horse feed restored market equilibrium:v-ing當主詞,而且是個主動句persuading..restored......符合ETS的偏好。而且,用what had previously been horse feed比former horse feed要好。再補充,這裡用過去完成表達一個比過去(restored)更早的事,實在很完美!
有關分號的考題,請看:OG 81, 不當使用分號也可參考一下OG94 154另外,對破折號有興趣的人,也可參考104
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帖子clarence » 2006-02-19 19:42

此題為B,GMAC的所有題目中,被動解的題目皆來自於作該動作的主體不明確或未點出或不正確,此題就是這樣.回樓上,這題真正的使restore equilibrium market 主體是未點出也不需點出,應該是sales of breakfast cereals
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帖子hsudk » 2006-02-21 14:39

同意 Gogoto 的說法,(E)最大的問題在 when。when 具有強烈表達時間的觀念,而在題目中看不到有這樣的暗示。
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帖子dibert8 » 2007-04-04 00:26

(E) 裡面的 former 也不太好, 難道有 latter horse feed 嗎? (former <> previously ...) former 似乎是前面文章有提過才用,指先前提過的那個東西.
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