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文章shopcat » 2005-03-05 14:58

As sources of electrical power, windmills now account for only about 2,500 megawatts nationwide, but production is almost expected to double by the end of the year, which would provide enough electricity for 1.3 million households.

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A. almost expected to double by the end of the year, which would provide

B. almost expected that it will double by the end of the year, thus providing

C. expected that it will almost double by the end of the year to provide

D. expected almost to double by the end of the year and thus to provide

E. expected almost to double by the end of the year, which would thus be providing

答案是D
A錯是因為which指代有問題
可是D難道不會有主詞不清的毛病ㄇ?
and thus to provide....的主詞可能是production 阿?!
誰能告訴我為何D對 :|||
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文章Calvin » 2005-03-05 16:38

"but" introduces an independent clause, so "production" is definitely the subject of "and thus to provide".

windmill could not be the subject of " to provide ".

production .... to double .... and thus to provide....clear , logical ,and grammatical.

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文章shopcat » 2005-03-05 16:48

Choice D would be more better.
But I originally thought the meaning of this sentence should define "windmill" as the subject. If the subject is production, the meaning would be a little queer.
Don't you think so?
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文章Calvin » 2005-03-05 17:14

what is expected to double and thus to provide enough electricity ?

the production ( = about 2,500 megawatts ) does so.

windmill can provide electrictiy ? no, i don't think so , windmill is just an equipment.

the energy generated by windmill is the actual agent to provide the electricity for millions houses.

open to discuss.
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文章shopcat » 2005-03-05 17:53

Actually, I agree to choose D. Because this sentence is good looking. :P
But I still can't understand why "production" can provide the electricity.
Please give me an advice! ^__^
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文章Pufa » 2005-03-05 18:42

shopcat \$m[1]:Actually, I agree to choose D. Because this sentence is good looking. :P
But I still can't understand why "production" can provide the electricity.
Please give me an advice! ^__^


production就是先前講的『2,500 megawatts風力發電』 :smile
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文章shopcat » 2005-03-05 19:20

^o) 是怎麼看出production是指先前的2,500 megawatts風力發電咧?
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文章agk99 » 2005-03-05 22:07

其實就是句意囉
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文章hwatai » 2005-03-06 23:11

我覺得,Calvin的第一次回覆已經解釋了

"but" introduces an independent clause, so "production" is definitely the subject of "and thus to provide".
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文章soami » 2005-05-04 16:02

hwatai \$m[1]:我覺得,Calvin的第一次回覆已經解釋了

"but" introduces an independent clause, so "production" is definitely the subject of "and thus to provide".



題外話, and thus to provide 可以改成 thus providing 嗎??
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文章evelight » 2005-09-04 00:41

改thus providing就違反平行對稱囉
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文章jim9619 » 2005-09-09 19:27

請問一下c錯在哪!!
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文章Pufa » 2005-09-09 19:57

jim9619 \$m[1]:請問一下c錯在哪!!
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C. expected that it will almost double [s]by the end of the year[/s] to provide

被動用法be expected接to時後面的句子會比接that的要簡潔。

it will almost double to provide...
它將會變成近乎兩倍的量以提供...
跟原來的題意差太多了。
You get what you share
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文章CUGGYER » 2005-09-09 22:59

其實B跟C還有有一個tense不一致的問題 前面是expected 或者說 will代表一種確定 expect表達一種不確定性所以will要改成would 較好 請問這樣思考是否正確 其實我也不確定
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文章BECKY » 2005-11-04 00:29

這題我是想...
A) almost位置不好
B) almost位置不好
C) expect to ... 比較好也較簡潔
D) expected almost to....最清楚
E) which..子句...modifier ambiguity不知道要修飾誰

所以這題選D

open to discuss...^^
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