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文章chloemoney » 2005-08-10 16:13

agk99 \$m[1]:ABCDE的後半部都是假設法,也配合句意,都可以
所以就看前半論有沒有平衡對稱


這裡所提的PARALLELISM是指yet the temperatures are so cold and the cap….之間的平衡吧?
所以如果以這個來看的話C,D,E就可以不用考慮,而A,我可能要在複習一下so that 的用法,不過我覺得在這之間加了一個逗號變成插入句,怪怪的。且B選項中的 「分號」用來帶入解釋,而were it to do so, it明確的指出前面的 little of the polar ice,所以比較清楚。

A.is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer; otherwise,
B.is so reflective that little of the polar ice melts during the summer; were it to do so,
C.so reflective that little polar ice melts during the summer, or else
D.reflective, so that little of the polar ice melts during the summer, or
E.reflects so that little of the polar ice melts during the summer; if it did
時光無法倒流,我只想大步向前
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文章VC » 2005-08-17 18:48

B選項的so....that表因果
A選項的 so that是以至於的意思 不合題意
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文章chihhan123 » 2005-10-05 22:48

QQcandy \$m[1]:otherwise 一定要用假設法嗎 ?? 每次句子 出現 otherwise 我就覺的我會錯...包括邏級  :P


請看莫老師專題講義第2頁

otherwise的用法

He worked very hard; otherwise he could not have passed the exam.

= He worked very hard; if he had not worked very hard, he could not have passed the exam

老師並補充
"有otherwise 就有should would could might"

所以本題 (我自己想的)

Antarctica receives more solar radiation than does any other place on Earth, yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer; otherwise, the water levels of the oceans would rise 250 feet and engulf most of the world’s great cities.
=
Antarctica receives more solar radiation than does any other place on Earth, yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap [u]is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer;If much polar ice should (可能性小的假設)melt during the summer, the water levels of the oceans would rise 250 feet and engulf most of the world’s great cities.

不曉得大家看覺得如何? 還是我的Otherwise解錯方向了呢?

如果這樣的想法對的話,B答案的 If it were to do so 的意思又是什麼?

這個do so 是要溶化還是不要溶化?

能夠指 "南極冰山若不溶化,會造成大淹水" 嗎?
還是指 "南極冰山若溶化,會造成大淹水"

句義要的一定是後者,If it were to do so能夠明確表達嗎?
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chihhan123 \$m[1]:
QQcandy \$m[1]:otherwise 一定要用假設法嗎 ?? 每次句子 出現 otherwise 我就覺的我會錯...包括邏級  :P


請看莫老師專題講義第2頁

otherwise的用法

He is rich; otherwise he could not have passed the exam.

= He is rich; if he had not worked very hard, he could not have passed the exam


這個例句好奇怪阿 你是不是打錯字阿?
rich<--->pass the exam ?? 怎會有關呢??
chihhan123 \$m[1]:
老師並補充
"有otherwise 就有should would could might"


這個同意

chihhan123 \$m[1]:
所以本題 (我自己想的)

Antarctica receives more solar radiation than does any other place on Earth, yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer; otherwise, the water levels of the oceans would rise 250 feet and engulf most of the world’s great cities.
=
Antarctica receives more solar radiation than does any other place on Earth, yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap [u]is reflective, so that little polar ice melts during the summer;If much polar ice should (可能性小的假設)melt during the summer, the water levels of the oceans would rise 250 feet and engulf most of the world’s great cities.

不曉得大家看覺得如何? 還是我的Otherwise解錯方向了呢?

如果這樣的想法對的話,B答案的 If it were to do so 的意思又是什麼?

這個do so 是要溶化還是不要溶化?

能夠指 "南極冰山若不溶化,會造成大淹水" 嗎?
還是指 "南極冰山若溶化,會造成大淹水"

句義要的一定是後者,If it were to do so能夠明確表達嗎?



阿阿 我知道大家的問題了啦
突然覺得怎會有人在疑義這個融不融化的問題

大家一定是沒抓住那個關鍵字啦 little
否定詞 --little polar ice melts during the summer 應解成極冰幾乎不會融化
大家一定是把little當成形容詞來看 而忽略它否定地位了
就解成有些極冰會融化...

我不覺得這邊融化不融化會發生問題阿??
otherwise假設語氣也沒問題阿
至於那個were it to do so 很清楚阿 不會造成誤意 do so當然是說do melt

請大家注意行文方向
這是考GMAT最重要的語感
原題Antarctica.....on Earth(行文方向為冰是應該融化),yet(轉折語-行文方向轉變)the temperature are so cold.....during the summer(行文方向轉為冰不會融化); otherwise否則(另一轉折語-行文方向再轉向一次),the water....would rise...great cities.(行文方向為冰大量融化)

最後一句轉折 因為沒發生/還沒發生 所以用假設語氣

所以選項後半段不管那個選項 都不發生說明不清的問題
不管怎麼寫 反正都是假設語氣 而且不是這題設計的考點

這題設計的考點很明顯 就是 so....that..../ so that 怎麼分辨

從這個考點看 (E)錯是因為 ice cap reflects so that...冰棚為了OOXX而去反射??? 文意不合理 而且它用動詞reflects

(C).(D)不看了 因為它結構不對 少動詞

(B) is so reflective(因) that little polar ice melts 極冰幾乎不會融化(果)
這個合理 結構也對

(A) is reflective, so that(表目的 翻成為了)...
於是文意又變成跟(E)一樣不合理了 冰棚為了ooxx而變成reflective????



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文章chihhan123 » 2005-10-05 23:55

agustin \$m[1]:otherwise 一定要用假設法嗎 ?? 每次句子 出現 otherwise 我就覺的我會錯...包括邏級  :P


請看莫老師專題講義第2頁

這個例句好奇怪阿 你是不是打錯字阿?
rich<--->pass the exam ?? 怎會有關呢??

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
抱歉抱歉 是我老眼昏花打錯行了...特此更正

He worked very hard; otherwise he could not have passed the exam.

= He worked very hard; if he had not worked very hard, he could not have passed the exam
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並感謝你對語氣轉折的解釋.
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文章lunar916 » 2005-10-05 23:55

我有個問題在於B跟C
B: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is so reflective that...
C: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap so reflective that...

有人說因為平衡的關係,B的 ice cap IS so reflective 是必要的
我想問,假釋ice cap是覆數 ice caps, 那有必要說
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps are so reflective that...
還是這裡就可以省略第2個"are",成為
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...
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文章agustin » 2005-10-06 00:01

lunar916 \$m[1]:我有個問題在於B跟C
B: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is so reflective that...
C: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap so reflective that...

有人說因為平衡的關係,B的 ice cap IS so reflective 是必要的
我想問,假釋ice cap是覆數 ice caps, 那有必要說
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps are so reflective that...
還是這裡就可以省略第2個"are",成為
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...


我認為還是要寫出來耶 因為兩個主詞不一樣了
and前後已經變成兩個句子了
the temperatures are....and the ice caps are....
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文章lunar916 » 2005-10-06 00:10

agustin \$m[1]:
lunar916 \$m[1]:我有個問題在於B跟C
B: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is so reflective that...
C: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap so reflective that...

有人說因為平衡的關係,B的 ice cap IS so reflective 是必要的
我想問,假釋ice cap是覆數 ice caps, 那有必要說
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps are so reflective that...
還是這裡就可以省略第2個"are",成為
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...


我認為還是要寫出來耶 因為兩個主詞不一樣了
and前後已經變成兩個句子了
the temperatures are....and the ice caps are....


為啥
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...
讀起來還挺順口的勒.... = =...
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lunar916 \$m[1]:
agustin \$m[1]:

我認為還是要寫出來耶 因為兩個主詞不一樣了
and前後已經變成兩個句子了
the temperatures are....and the ice caps are....


為啥
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...
讀起來還挺順口的勒.... = =...


呵呵 因為 這樣才是正式寫作英文阿
GMAT考的是寫作英文哦
不是口說的語感
我跟外國人說話 也是一堆亂七八糟的關鍵字冒出來 我們照樣能溝通阿..
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文章greenfox » 2005-11-01 19:45

莫老師的選擇是B,大家參考看看吧~
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文章frank1002 » 2005-12-06 17:03

lunar916 \$m[1]:我有個問題在於B跟C
B: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is so reflective that...
C: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap so reflective that...

有人說因為平衡的關係,B的 ice cap IS so reflective 是必要的
我想問,假釋ice cap是覆數 ice caps, 那有必要說
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps are so reflective that...
還是這裡就可以省略第2個"are",成為
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...


請問一下上述的結構是否一定前後be動詞一樣
第二個be動詞才可省略?

我記得考古題有一題是用and來連接兩個主詞不同的被動式
So many people were hurt and windows broken that......

Anyway,我覺得c的前半段在文法或句意上沒有太大的問題,
前面有網友提到or else = otherwise,那麼C最大的問題
應該在於or else前面沒有用分號;隔開前後兩個不同的句子
造成流水句的現象...
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文章sweetymanman » 2006-06-10 17:29

temperature不會cold吧
這也是我一直以來的疑問
應該是題目的失誤吧


雖然好像過很久了,可以我還是去查了一下有沒有temperatures are cold 的用法

朗文字典對temperature的定義是 a measure of how hot or cold a place or thing is
常見的用法有:
at a temperature of something
high temperature
low temperature
a rise in temperature
a fall/drop in temperature
a temperature change/a change in temperature
the temperature rises/goes up (=it gets warmer)
the temperature falls/drops/goes down (=it gets colder)
a constant temperature (=one that does not change much)
room temperature (=neither hot nor cold)
air/water/body temperature (=how hot or cold the air, water, or someone's body is)
temperatures soar (=the weather becomes very hot)

雖然上面沒有temperatures are cold的用法
但是再查WIKIPEDIA
發覺在Winter storm 的解釋中有這麼一段:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Winter_stormA winter storm is a type of precipitation in which the dominant varieties of precipitation are forms that only occur at cold temperatures, such as snow or sleet, or a rainstorm where ground temperatures are cold enough to allow ice to form.

以上

大家當作補充喔!
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文章raywu » 2006-07-19 02:46

我有三個問題請教...

1.選項B的were it to do so... it代替的主詞為何!?

2.選項A既然是錯在錯誤使用so that的語法,那麼 ;+ otherwise沒有錯誤
囉!? 所以在otherwise使用時 前面一定要加分號嗎!?
並且在此題中otherwise(假設語法)的使用,是僅僅對 little polar
ice melts..還是根本是針對tempertures are so cold and ice cap
is so reflective that little polar ice melts.....的一種反向的假設狀
態呢!?

3.選項c的 or else,它的前面是使用逗號,是不是使用逗號即可呢?還是應該
要像otherwise一樣在前面使用分號!?所以選項C是錯在應該少加了be
動詞is,如此而已嗎!?
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文章nexxt0722 » 2006-09-08 13:19

1.選項B的were it to do so... it代替的主詞為何!?

理論上是代the polar ice,這樣句意才會通...但之前yongzhou所提little of the polar ice的可能性...讓我無法做出肯定的判斷

2.選項A既然是錯在錯誤使用so that的語法,那麼 ;+ otherwise沒有錯誤囉!?所以在otherwise使用時 前面一定要加分號嗎!?
並且在此題中otherwise(假設語法)的使用,是僅僅對 little polar
ice melts..還是根本是針對tempertures are so cold and ice cap
is so reflective that little polar ice melts.....的一種反向的假設狀
態呢!?

otherwise是副詞,為了連接前句,必須用分詞,否則就變成流水句了
otherwise應該是對前面整個描述做反向假設

3.選項c的 or else,它的前面是使用逗號,是不是使用逗號即可呢?還是應該 要像otherwise一樣在前面使用分號!?所以選項C是錯在應該少加了be 動詞is,如此而已嗎!?

or是連接詞,else是副詞,or else可視為一個連接詞組,既已有連接的功能,就無需分號,只要逗號即可
所謂理論,就是知道為什麼,但卻什麼都行不通;
所謂實務,就是不知道為什麼,但是什麼都行得通;
至於理論與實務合而為一:就是什麼都行不通,而且不知道為什麼!!
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文章dibert8 » 2007-05-19 08:03

frank1002 \$m[1]:
lunar916 \$m[1]:我有個問題在於B跟C
B: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap is so reflective that...
C: yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice cap so reflective that...

有人說因為平衡的關係,B的 ice cap IS so reflective 是必要的
我想問,假釋ice cap是覆數 ice caps, 那有必要說
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps are so reflective that...
還是這裡就可以省略第2個"are",成為
yet the temperatures are so cold and the ice caps so reflective that...


請問一下上述的結構是否一定前後be動詞一樣
第二個be動詞才可省略?

我記得考古題有一題是用and來連接兩個主詞不同的被動式
So many people were hurt and windows broken that......

Anyway,我覺得c的前半段在文法或句意上沒有太大的問題,
前面有網友提到or else = otherwise,那麼C最大的問題
應該在於or else前面沒有用分號;隔開前後兩個不同的句子
造成流水句的現象...


be 動詞的省略跟它是單複數應該沒有關係吧!

or (else) 是連接詞.
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