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[分享]gwd1-24 (分詞考點)

文章 » 2004-09-10 19:39

By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop prematurely.

A.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
B.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping
C.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping
D.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
E.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and the their dropping


今天在整理晚上要討論的 gwd , 忽然看到這道題大喜 ^^

狠漂亮的一題吧 ;) 大家好好體會喔.....不過好像大家都沒有問題 呵呵~

那很棒 拍拍手 ETS 我們來啦
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文章agk99 » 2004-09-10 20:10

:-$ 我忘了問
可不可以講一下為什麼D不對
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文章 » 2004-09-10 20:37

agk99 \$m[1]::-$ 我忘了問
可不可以講一下為什麼D不對


咦 ,我搞錯了嗎 :| 答案不就是D ?
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文章agk99 » 2004-09-10 20:43

不好意思
我想問
C的尾巴 dropping 和 d的尾巴 and to drop有何差別
我句意沒把握
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文章 » 2004-09-10 21:46

agk99 \$m[1]:不好意思
我想問
C的尾巴 dropping 和 d的尾巴 and to drop有何差別
我句意沒把握


C.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping

C)的 ,and dropping 中 , 是為了要引誘我們 (ETS壞蛋!)
相信drop不是
1.與change平衡 (所以用ving)
2.修飾前面的grayish green (所以加了and)
進而 完美推論 which 與 drop 都是修是前面的 tree growth

( :-@ 多低下的技倆啊 真生氣 !! )

D ) 中的causing needles to change .... and to drop.....

醬平衡的


不過 ,這題其實沒這麼複雜喔 , 從 C╱D 中的 which vs. causing
判段修飾對象歧異就行了 ^^


-------我是這樣理解的 應該沒錯吧....... :-# 再討論囉 ^^
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文章Grace » 2004-09-11 22:30

C)的 ,and dropping 中 , 是為了要引誘我們 (ETS壞蛋!)
相信drop不是
1.與change平衡 (所以用ving)
2.修飾前面的grayish green (所以加了and)
進而 完美推論 which 與 drop 都是修是前面的 tree growth



我的想法是 ",and dropping 無法與前面的動詞cause 或 change 構成平衡",句子結構很奇怪, 而且and前面加了逗號, 讓人搞不懂主詞是誰, 造成句意不清楚.

Any thing wrong, please feel free to correct me. Thanks.~ ;)
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文章 » 2004-09-12 00:19

Grace \$m[1]:
C)的 ,and dropping 中 , 是為了要引誘我們 (ETS壞蛋!)
相信drop不是 1.與change平衡 (所以用ving)
2.修飾前面的grayish green (所以加了and)
進而 完美推論 which 與 drop 都是修是前面的 tree growth



我的想法是 ",and dropping 無法與前面的動詞cause 或 change 構成平衡",句子結構很奇怪, 而且and前面加了逗號, 讓人搞不懂主詞是誰, 造成句意不清楚.

Any thing wrong, please feel free to correct me. Thanks.~ ;)


Grace ...挖ㄟ想法跟你是一樣的啦 ;)
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文章Janet » 2005-08-11 14:29

不好意思,我想問問題喔~

我想請問的是,A與D我分不清楚ㄋㄟ.我怎麼覺得A比較對呢???
我把A的causing解讀為which causes
因此A全句是By suching sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree,tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid,which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop prematurely.

我想AD大抉擇是句意的取決,但我覺得A句意比較對ㄋㄟ,請各位大大幫忙解惑!!
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文章Janet » 2005-08-11 16:42

我了解了,A.D判決要在前的By suching sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree

其主詞應是the woolly adelgid而非tree growth,因此A脫節.

感謝gumer解惑
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文章Lian » 2005-10-10 19:00

魚寫到:
不過 ,這題其實沒這麼複雜喔 , 從 C╱D 中的 which vs. causing
判段修飾對象歧異就行了 ^^

這點我不大懂
,which causes比,causing清楚阿
gwd很多這類的題型
也是百錯不厭...
請各位幫忙解惑!!!!
感恩不盡
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文章agustin » 2005-10-11 02:59

Lian \$m[1]:魚寫到:
不過 ,這題其實沒這麼複雜喔 , 從 C╱D 中的 which vs. causing
判段修飾對象歧異就行了 ^^

這點我不大懂
,which causes比,causing清楚阿
gwd很多這類的題型
也是百錯不厭...
請各位幫忙解惑!!!!
感恩不盡


沒錯 , which指涉對象是比, causing清楚 但是這題的,which指涉錯誤
所以它是很清楚沒錯 也錯得很明確... <:o)

你可以看看OG.49 的討論串
我在那邊有寫 這邊不重複了
http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=9277
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Re: [分享]gwd1-24 (分詞考點)

文章whoopsnow » 2005-10-12 13:19

[quote="魚"]By sucking sap from the young twigs of the hemlock tree, tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop prematurely.

A.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
B.tree growth is retarded by the woolly adelgid, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and their dropping
C.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles to change color from deep green to grayish green, and dropping
D.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, causing needles to change color from deep green to grayish green and to drop
E.the woolly adelgid retards tree growth, and this causes the color of needles to change from deep green to grayish green, and the their dropping

[個人意見]
數落C的不是:
xxxx, which causes needles to change color, and dropping prematurely.
這是多麼爛的句子啊---- 爛爛爛爛爛~~
好歹也要which causes needles to change color and to drop prematurely吧

D的話就完美多了...
xxxx, causing needles to change color and to drop prematurely.

選D... GMAT輕鬆又愉快:P
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文章meefoo » 2005-10-13 19:09

請問一下,C的 , causing 是"分詞代替連接詞"來的嗎?
原文是否為: the wolly adelgid retards tree growth and causes needless...
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文章維尼 » 2005-10-13 21:56

meefoo \$m[1]:請問一下,C的 , causing 是"分詞代替連接詞"來的嗎?
原文是否為: the wolly adelgid retards tree growth and causes needless...


你是說 D 吧
如果是照莫老師的說法
就是叫作 分詞代替連接詞
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文章whoopsnow » 2005-10-14 10:55

[quote="meefoo"]請問一下,C的 , causing 是"分詞代替連接詞"來的嗎?
原文是否為: the wolly adelgid [color=blue]retards[/color] tree growth [color=blue]and causes [/color]needless...[/quote]

不對 按照句意
應為the wolly adelgid retards tree growth, which causes needles....
是"阻礙樹木生長"這件事造成葉子掉落
而非兩件平行發生的事
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