OG 249

[pcl12]

249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.
(A)were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(B)influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(C)was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
(D)was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
(E)were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of

想請問有關B選項
including 是修飾musicians,沒有可能修飾到前面whose子句中的名詞,對嗎?
好奇問一下,而若including 要修飾的對象是whose子句中的名詞-artists的話,
那including緊接在artists後會不會造成雙向修飾,即可修飾前面的artists又可修飾後面的musicians?

[Calvin]

會不會有雙向修飾的問題，我認為應該沒有

including 一般來說都是前修飾的，緊跟在被修飾的片語、名詞後

我倒是沒看過後修飾的句子

妳倒是可以觀察一下，看能不能找出including後修飾的例句

[davidlee0222]

請問是要問分辭補述結構
還是要問include這個字

including在這裡是分辭補述的次要結構
分辭有三種可能
1.修飾前句最接近名詞
2.修飾前句較遠名詞
3.修飾前句整件事
絕不會有向後修飾的狀況

including這個字所開啟的受詞串
基本上算是一種慣用語
必指前事物包含後面數種受詞
因此也不可能出現向後修飾的狀況

會向後修飾的只有副詞
雙向修飾也都是因為副詞在搗亂

[pcl12]

原來是這樣，謝謝

[evelight]

正好唸到這題，可以舊帖重問麼？

OG的解釋提到A,C選項的錯誤裡，有一項是that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians.

我想了半天，正確答案的including也是修飾musicians
那麼AC的錯誤是在於that不能作非限定使用嗎？

[Pufa]

正好唸到這題，可以舊帖重問麼？

OG的解釋提到A,C選項的錯誤裡，有一項是that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians.

我想了半天，正確答案的including也是修飾musicians
那麼AC的錯誤是在於that不能作非限定使用嗎？

是壓，
that用於限定修飾，跟修飾對象不可以有逗點隔開。
不過如果『...., that』的逗點前面是一個插入句的話應該是可以。

[peche]

oh....
不能有逗號押~~

[dennis_wtliu]

我想請問B選項，我記得之前我有在板上看到說 comma後加Ving的情況下,
Ving 是修飾前面的V耶, 沒有comma的情況才是形容先行詞
所以現在我看到comma後有Ving跟that(拜讀davidlee大作中學到,這是that跟which唯一的差別!!haha)的就會先刪掉哩

[shine_allen]

請問正確答案中,influenced是動辭還是形容詞,
如果是動辭,插入劇中沒有連接辭連接也不能在插入句中加入完整句子
如果是形容詞,句意佑怪怪的

[tsaowen]

請問正確答案中,influenced是動辭還是形容詞,
如果是動辭,插入劇中沒有連接辭連接也不能在插入句中加入完整句子
如果是形容詞,句意佑怪怪的

你的疑惑跟我一樣
看好久 有錯請指正
主詞應該是 BM 主要動詞是inspired
中間插入語的主詞是 repertory, viewson..., vocal style
動詞是 influenced

請高手解釋一下吧~

open to discuss~

[stilalala]

請問正確答案中,influenced是動辭還是形容詞,
如果是動辭,插入劇中沒有連接辭連接也不能在插入句中加入完整句子
如果是形容詞,句意佑怪怪的

你的疑惑跟我一樣
看好久 有錯請指正
主詞應該是 BM 主要動詞是inspired
中間插入語的主詞是 repertory, viewson..., vocal style
動詞是 influenced

請高手解釋一下吧~

open to discuss~

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from his own.

主語是 BM ,動詞是inspired,
中間的whose repertory,view,vocal style 是修飾BM的
whose repertory,view,vocal style 的動詞是 influnced

其實有很完美的平行
influnced .... inspired
雖然是在不同句子,也修飾不同的東西,但從整句大平衡的觀點來看
其實也是平行的

再者
用influnce. inspire很清楚的傳達動作,用動詞連接了主語與受詞

如果是選
inspiration (n)
會有個邏輯上的問題
BM=Inspiration
人怎麼等於inspiration呢

這是我解題的方法
剩下就是including的用法
有錯麻煩指證

[karryfan]

Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia , whose music differed significantly from his own.

請問正確答案裡，紅字的部份。算是同位語嗎？

[Ajinaruto]

個人想法跟樓上tsaowen大一樣
插入句從whose到artists為止
所以主要動詞應該是also inspired many musicians的inspired,主詞是BM
應該沒有同位語的問題(同位語應該要是名詞子句才行吧S+V這類的)

另外,我認為influenced跟inspired應該沒有平衡的關係吧,前者是插入句的動詞,主詞是whose N1,N2,and N3;後者是主要結構的動詞,主詞是BM
若主詞不一樣的話也算平衡嗎?
只是兩者動詞時態一樣看起來比較洽當吧

以上個人見解,有錯請指正,謝謝

[mignon]

在OG11th作到這題,也有問題想發問,
如果inspired是主要動詞,
主要動詞前加also,總覺得怪怪的!

有人可以幫忙解釋嗎?

[dibert8]

inspired 是主要動詞沒錯,also是副詞; BM本身是音樂家,也激勵了其他的音樂家.