[問題]真題(所謂 730 26回#24)

[kevin911]

According to United States census data, while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.
A: while there was about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

B: there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the
home in 1975, in 2000, almost two-thirds of those mothers were employed outside the home.

C: in 1975, about one-third of mothers with young children worked outside the home, in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home.

D: even thought in 1975 there were about one-third of mothers with young children who worked outside the home, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000.

E: with about one-third of mothers with young children working outside the home in 1975, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home in 2000.


主要的疑問 是在第一和第三選項
公佈的答案是第三選項
但我覺得它犯了流水句的毛病
缺少連接詞
麻煩各位牛人們 幫解
謝謝

[eggcake520]

Ding..

[sunkan]

c選項中間的逗號你要把它改成分號,這樣這句就很漂亮了
時間對時間,句子對句子,平衡
而且沒有虛字的問題
C: in 1975, about one-third of mothers with young children worked outside the home; in 2000, almost two-thirds of such mothers were employed outside the home.