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[問題]考古題 P58 #6

帖子sabrina » 2004-12-22 11:14

Believed to originate from a small area on their forehead,elephants emit low-frequency sounds that may be used as a "secret language" to communicate with other members of the herd.

A) 如上

B)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds that are believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,and they may use this

C)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds,believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,that they may use

D)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,elephants emit low-frequency sounds they may use

E)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,low-frequency sounds are emitted by elephants that maybe used


ANS: C

Anybody knows why C is correct?

my questions

在C中
believed to originate from a small area on thier foreheads,==>看起來是修飾 sounds, 但以逗點分開,不也容易讓人誤會是修飾elephants

另外 that they may use 離sounds 太遠,很容易讓人產生誤會是修飾 foreheads


如果改成底下的句子會不會比較好呢?

Elephants emit low-frequency sounds that are believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads and that may be used as.....
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帖子micht » 2004-12-22 20:43

雖然 , believed .............., 插入句 刪掉後 沒有問題
之前也看過不少 N,________, that ... 中間隔著插入句 that仍然修飾 N

Elephants emit low-frequency sounds which are believed to originated...

non-restrictive clause 改 participle phrase

=> Elephants emit low-frequency sounds,believed to originate



只是我也有相同困惑著是
believed是否會修飾到 Elephants........?

可是如果用具意評斷的話
,believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads
主詞就肯定不是 Elephant自己 自己怎麼會 orginiate from 自己的foreheads呢...
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帖子micht » 2004-12-22 23:03

ethan大哥怎麼好久沒看到拉~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~??? 呼叫ethan即各大熊熊們
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帖子micht » 2004-12-24 14:14

此題我在cd發問了...
可以追蹤一下

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp ... 3&ID=85578
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帖子sabrina » 2004-12-24 15:37

THANKS A LOT

BUT...我沒辦法進去...能否麻煩妳大概說明一下嗎
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帖子micht » 2004-12-24 19:36

請教一題SC

Believed to originate from a small area on their forehead,elephants emit low-frequency sounds that may be used as a "secret language" to communicate with other members of the herd.

A) Believed to originate from a small area on their forehead,elephants emit low-frequency sounds that may be used

B)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds that are believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,and they may use this

C)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds,believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,that they may use

D)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,elephants emit low-frequency sounds they may use

E)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,low-frequency sounds are emitted by elephants that maybe used

Ans: (C)

我的疑問是..............

雖然 , believed .............., 插入句 刪掉後 沒有問題
之前也看過不少 N,________, that ... 中間隔著插入句 that仍然修飾 N

Elephants emit low-frequency sounds which are believed to originated...

non-restrictive clause 改 participle phrase

=> Elephants emit low-frequency sounds,believed to originate



只是我也有相同困惑著是
believed是否會修飾到 Elephants........?

可是如果用句意評斷的話
,believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads
主詞就肯定不是 Elephant自己 自己怎麼會 orginiate from 自己的foreheads呢...




joe11 \$m[1]:摟主說的對,logically, believed 不能修飾elephants.

請參閱OG146T對choice E 的解釋.



micht \$m[1]:joe11,

我以為 S+V...., believed (因為以逗點分隔 所以 believed 修飾main clause's subject 而非the nearest noun)

我看了OG 146 (E) 不同的是
damage lacking 中間沒有","逗點 所以修飾 the nearest noun "damage"

疑問是 有逗點和沒逗點 修飾對象如何區分?

難道此題一定要以句意來判斷 , believed 的修飾對象嗎? 所以 , believed 修飾沒有規定是修飾 the nearest noun or 主要子句的主詞?

感謝


Springfield \$m[1]:樓主在believed之前加入which be(句首除外)就明白插入語修飾的具體對象了;句意也是一種判斷;


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帖子micht » 2004-12-26 06:16

To sabrina:

參考一下OG#38

38. Scientists have observed large concentrations of
heavy-metal deposits in the upper twenty centimeters of Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there.

(A) Baltic Sea sediments, which are consistent with the growth of industrial activity there
(B) Baltic Sea sediments, where the growth of industrial activity is consistent with these findings
(C) Baltic Sea sediments, findings consistent with its growth of industrial activity
(D) sediments from the Baltic Sea, findings consistent with the growth of industrial activity in the area
(E) sediments from the Baltic Sea, consistent with the growth of industrial activity there

Ans: (D)

"finding _________________" 邏輯修飾對象不是最近的 noun (the Baltic Sea) 也不是(sediments)

而是前面一整句"Scientists have observed large concentrations of
heavy-metal deposits in the.........."

再看Q39
39. For members of the seventeenth-century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, a method to protect warriors against enemy arrows and spears.

A) a method to protect
B) as a method protecting
C) protecting
D) as a protection of
E) to protect


Ans:(C)

邏輯修飾對象是"animal-hide shields with wooden frames "
也不是最近的noun (items of military equipment)


我個人的感覺........歡迎大家指證..謝謝
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Re: [問題]考古題 P58 #6

帖子 » 2004-12-26 07:04

sabrina \$m[1]:Believed to originate from a small area on their forehead,elephants emit low-frequency sounds that may be used as a "secret language" to communicate with other members of the herd.

A) 如上

A 不好, dangling

B)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds that are believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,and they may use this

B不好 , 典型的, and 平衡錯誤

C)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds,believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,that they may use

D)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,elephants emit low-frequency sounds they may use

D 不好 句子破碎

E)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,low-frequency sounds are emitted by elephants that maybe used

E 不好 句子破碎


1. 請樓主往後po文時,順手將畫線部分ㄧ起補上,方便手邊沒有相關題目的網友

2. 樓主提出的問題, (C) 是ETS中很常出現的分詞代替連接詞句型.不一定是最輕楚的,但是符合簡潔原則.又沒有指代上的錯誤. 不需要鑽這種牛角尖 ;)



ANS: C

Anybody knows why C is correct?

my questions

在C中
believed to originate from a small area on thier foreheads,==>看起來是修飾 sounds, 但以逗點分開,不也容易讓人誤會是修飾elephants



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帖子cg » 2005-08-13 23:38

Believed to originate from a small area on their forehead,elephants emit low-frequency sounds that may be used as a "secret language" to communicate with other members of the herd.

A) 如上
B)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds that are believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,and they may use this
C)Elephants emit low-frequency sounds,believed to originate from a small area on their foreheads,that they may use
D)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,elephants emit low-frequency sounds they may use
E)Originating,it is believed,from a small area on their foreheads,low-frequency sounds are emitted by elephants that maybe used

補充一下這一題
ADE因為脫節所以很快排除

我認為B錯是在於代詞 this
光憑,and去判斷是不是平衡句有點危險,因為可能是代表獨立子句的出現,不過的確是用來判斷考點的方式

其實會想討論B是因為我自己選錯 ;-$
this的指代很少在OG裡討論 唯一一題是OG215 但考點是 do so
我記得this有指代前句的用法
查了一下字典[COBUILD]
You use this to refer back to an idea or situation expressed in a previous sentence or sentences.
A job is pretty much nine-to-five. Is this what you feel would make you happy?
此題應該單純只是指代low-frequency sounds,那就應該要用those

不知道這個解釋或我的認知有沒有錯誤?

越做SC越怕簡潔,有時候我認為簡潔的,在OG裡指代不清,有時反之
總之,就是高深莫測的SC 8-|
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