[問題]GWD4-34

[Jessy]

Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.


A. based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting
B. based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of
C. and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of
D. and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting
E. and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited

答案B可以接受,只是這�the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans 是啥東東? 跟the cultivation of crops such as corn and beans有何不同?

[游客]

這題問的好,我也不會
所以推....

[micht]

such=adj. 那樣的

such crops as crop and beans

那樣的農作物 例如 小麥 & 豆子

[agk99]

cultivation of such crops as corn and beans

其實就是cultivation of crops, such as corn and beans...

[游客]

能夠理解,不過還是覺得有點怪怪的
誰能再加以補充

再討論

[liwuu]

能夠理解,不過還是覺得有點怪怪的
誰能再加以補充

再討論

我的想法跟agk99大大相同
舉例說明N的寫法
N, such as N1 and N2
也可以寫成 such N as N1 and N2
都是同樣用來舉例說明...

[benetracy]

題目中的......the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.
請問如果based on....是修飾society
那這樣是...society,(which is)based on...的省略嗎?
請問前面有逗號仍可將whih is省略嗎?
我記得莫老師在曾說過"非限制的形容詞子劇最好別改為分詞片語"
是指主動的形容詞子句嗎?
(ex. .....a person, who establish a mosque in the building...
他說其中who establish 最好別改為establishing)

麻煩大家幫幫忙 謝謝

[agk99]

我記得莫老師在曾說過"非限制的形容詞子劇最好別改為分詞片語"

所以這裡就不是非限制子句，進一步來說
我認為based on 是修飾Mochica developed their own elaborate society,這整句
請繼續討論

[cocaine]

,based on....,
插入句,主要就是修飾前面那句說明他們發展出的社會是以啥為食物.

至於非限制的形容詞子劇最好別改為分詞片語,我想並非一定是正確,只是依據,我想最好還是從其他地方下手比較好,因為修辭中蠻多地方都是用分詞結構.

[chihhan123]

Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.


A. based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting
B. based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of
C. and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of
D. and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting
E. and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited

這題這樣解應該更清楚吧

這題考<<平衡法>><<Such as vs like>>

第一步，舉例說明用such as 不用like (A)(C)(E)不選
第二步，劃線部分有and, and 前面有comma, 平衡三個，
答案(D)不選，不平衡，
答案(B)對，the+名詞+of...,the+名詞+of..., and the+名詞+of...平衡對稱。

[Francis]

那請問為何不能選 (D)
是錯在 and they 開頭嗎？
我是覺得平衡也可是說是 such as 後面三個平衡
還是錯在用 cultivation 不比 cultivat(ing)好呢？

[stilalala]

那請問為何不能選 (D)
是錯在 and they 開頭嗎？
我是覺得平衡也可是說是 such as 後面三個平衡
還是錯在用 cultivation 不比 cultivat(ing)好呢？

小小看法
罪後面的exploitating跟前面的cultivation, harvest不平行
還有依照原句的意思, based on....這一個部份是用來修飾society的,
d有點改變句意,變成是"M" base the society on ...
變成強調"M"做這個動作,而非修飾SOCIETY
敬請指教

[Abel]

the N of N, the N of N, and the N of N--->B

[winihsi]

Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.


A. based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting
B. based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of
C. and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of
D. and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting
E. and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited

C-"basing it on" is unidiomatic
D,E-"they" refer to???
between A and B, the only difference is cultivating and cultivation...
cultivation in B is the common noun usage for cultivate
Therefore, the correct answer is B

[lightsaber]

Building on civilizations that preceded them in coastal Peru, the Mochica developed their own elaborate society, based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting other wild and domestic resources.


A. based on cultivating such crops like corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and shellfish, and exploiting
B. based on the cultivation of such crops as corn and beans, the harvesting of fish and seafood, and the exploitation of
C. and basing it on the cultivation of crops like corn and beans, harvesting fish and seafood, and the exploiting of
D. and they based it on their cultivation of crops such as corn and beans, the harvest of fish and seafood, and exploiting
E. and they based it on their cultivating such crops like corn and beans, their harvest of fish and shellfish, and they exploited

C-"basing it on" is unidiomatic
D,E-"they" refer to???
between A and B, the only difference is cultivating and cultivation...
cultivation in B is the common noun usage for cultivate
Therefore, the correct answer is B

D,E:They應該無指代問題,主要錯在不平衡